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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*claps excitedly* OH! Wonderful chapter, Dear! I loved all the boy's families. I think Marianna is one of my favorites. oh and those little ones were just so precious. glad Harry wasn't injured by the stunning spell, not sure any of them would've made it through another scare! Max's dad is a little... iffy, lol but his mother is absolutely darling! and I look forward to seeing more of his grandfather. that man was so much fun! Nasta's brother is hilarious as his interaction with Harry and I'm so glad all of the mate's parents aprove! Still absolutely enamored with your fic! It's wonderful and makes me smile constantly and get all sorts of warm fuzzies. XD love love LOVE it and I will be eagerly awaiting more! ^^

btw, sorry if my adressing you as dear and darling was a bit wierd.... I don't really think about it! XD I just do it and some people are put off especially since I don't actually know you at all. just wanted you to know I'm not being a creeper I just call everyone things like that. especially when they get me addicted to such wonderful stories! XD
person And The Fallen Shall Rise
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally review but I love this story! Your characters have depth and you are developing a very intriguing plot line. I LOVE IT!! (And you wrote who I wanted for Harry's mates BONUS!)
person Mog
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ack! I'm so happy you adopted this story, you've taken it to soaring heights and the very best part is Harry isn't a whiny, constantly-crying sub. Seriously that's the best part. Patiently waiting for the next chapter! :)
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
why does every body have to make ron the jerk it get old, ron does have some ponints harry 16 there 40 that a crime, so ron right, and even if the courts front them not guily we know they are becouse we seen it, so again ron has some points, could you be ok with your best friend dating a guy twice there age and was a murder.

sorry just hate have ron the jerk, it get old.
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Haha how embarrassed will Ron be knowing he got his butt beat by a pregnant man XD I can't wait for the gathering and for the Malfoys to finally show up.
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay! NEW CHAPTER!*does freak-out happy dance* I got so excited when I saw the update! ^^ I'm glad I made you smile, especially 'cause your story makes ME smile so much! ^^ I love that scene with dumbledore and harry. So nice to see a little relaxation for him! gah! I have never hated Ron so much! stop being a douchebag! I hope harry didn't kill him, I know how hard that would be for him and loads of other people! I can't believe you ended with him getting hit by a spell! SO MEAN! lol cliffhangers are evil! I can't wait to read more and see if Harry's ok, and who cast at him. And I am very excited to meet families! they sound like too much fun! I'll keep checking back!

PS. I was reading through some earlier reviews and I saw someone complaining about how you made Ron the jerk and how it gets old and stuff. Honestly, I've seen why more fics where it's Hermoine and Ginny who flip it over Harry's chosen relationships. And Yeah, they're older but Harry's not really human and in the Dracken culture it's obviously fine! Besides it turns out to be good that he has older mates because he and Draco and Blaise only know so much about the culture! and if they were all teenagers I'm pretty sure someone would end up dead by accident. There's only so long so many teens can be around eachother constantly and not blow up at something.
... sorry, didn't mean to go off on a rant... it just bothered me that they were giving you crap for it. On another note! I heard someone mention Fred and George? The twins would be a fun appearance! if they're around you know. ^^ Wonder how Molly's going to react to Harry's beating her son... she's been really good to him so far so I'm interested to see what she does... if you put her in there, you don't have to! lol take your time and write to your heart's content! We'll all be here when you post! ^^
Love it and Carry on, darling!!!
person Hekate
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My word, this story is so amazing! I look forward to all the updates, and when I see you've updated it makes me smile! Thank you so much for being an awesome writer.
person tamsinjr
schedule October 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story its awesome :)
person djaddict
schedule October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So I was wondering... Since Drakens are "dark" creatures and have to hide from the general wizarding populace, how do they usually explain their absences for the heat period? I mean, everyone at Hogwarts has been told that Harry has an illness but what about Max & Nasta missing work? Just wondering.

Also, inquiring minds want to know... did Draco ever bottom during the heat? lol
schedule October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, ouch. I guess ronnie poked the meekest dragon once to often. Pity he doesn't know about the Drackon bit cause i imagine what goes for dragons would be pretty true for Drackons too. You know, the whole 'do not poke a sleeping dragon for you a crunchy and taste good with katsup' bit?
Dunno how their going to keep yon red headed moron alive this time. Still, this is going to have massive fall out, you can just tell.
yay, more back stories. ^^ I truely do hope Har still gets to go and meet the rellies and that his men ease off on Mio.