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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome and adorable. i;m glad the fall out from the fight was relatively on the positive side for Har. I'm also glad that Rons family find his behaviour offensive as well. He's being and utter dick.
Har is going absolutely wonderful parent and any kid of his (with Har's four mates) is going to be overflowing with family. he was so Kyaaaaaaaaa worthy with those little girls. The explanation of the female couple and Har;s reaction made me lol. I love how you've left Har good and feisty. He;s no ones doormat. ^^
Can't wait to see where you go from here and I hope Har can make that party.
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the story soooo much!!! It inspired me to write my own. When are Lucius and Narcissa going to find out and are they going to be good guys? please say they are!!!
Love your story can't wait for next chapter.
xx
person SilverLion
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. Love your creative ways to hurt someone. I think my favorite comment was when Harry told Myron he'd rip his face off with his teeth. Very nice. I hope that doesn't make me sound sick and twisted. I'm a D&D player (your one character's name sounds awfully close to the Seldarine power known as Angharradh) and am used to the drow's rather disgusting methods of torture and execution.
person Moontika
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry to have deleted the history of ff.net, it is clear that besides being an incredible story, has less sex scenes containing as many insane amount of sex.
While I prefer ff.net, I will follow you around here.
Could you tell me when you update, please?

I am Spanish and I use a google translator, forgive me if I understand correctly.
person Mari
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow fantastic update after so many angsty updates it was nice to see a fluffy happy one with so many sweet moments. Loved Harry meeting everyone, now to meet the last of the inlaws, Draco's parents. As everyone else was an OC I had no preconceptions as to how things might turn out with the Malfoys I'm so very curious to see how they take the news and what the Boys think of them.
person qwerty
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVED this chapter. I t was so great meeting all the families and seeing their interactions. Feisty Harry is amazing lol. Max's grandfather is great too. I hope you do write that birthday party scene later down the road!

Great job!!
person sophie
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really nice chapter- so long as well!!! I loved the introductions to all the family members, I think you left enough time between the meetings, and all the names have stuck in my head! Its good to see all the families getting on- I definitely think Harry should go to Alexanders (Max's Grandfather?) birthday party- that would be hilarious. Keep up the good work, I'm always really excited to see that this story has been updated!
person Alexi Naori
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOOOVE IT, PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON!!!!
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! I hope you update again!
person Betty
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! You should write 30,000 word chapters more often and no it wasnt too confusing it was wonderful. Cant wait for the next chapter!!!