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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nope. the explanations made things clearer. Man, i hope Har;s Dom's never find out how 'caring' the Dursley's were towards Har. they'd be dead before they could blink. it's really sweet now, Har has family all around. Is he going to meet the Malfoy's soon? they're the only in laws he hasn't met formally.
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
xDDD YAY!! Chapter 30 AND 100,000 visits?? Let's ce-le-brate good times, come one! It's a celebration! xD Thanks for another FANTASTIC chapter. xD It's a boyyyy, I'm so excited, I'm only 18 and this story makes me wanna have a baby so bad!! xD Haha, and thanks sooooo much for including that Dursley's bit, made my freaking day, I wasn't sure if I should laugh or scream!! Petunia is RETCHED! Putting my poor Harry in the TRASH?? Dx< NO! GAH! I can't wait for the boys to find out Harry was/is abused and kick those horrid creatures ASSES! >.<* GAH! Can't wait for the next episode! <3
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I HAD TO REVEIW AGAIN! I was reading through the other comments, and I just wanted to tell you to ignore Hope. She's obviously mentally handicapped. She can't spell or use proper grammar worth a damn, and is obviously a very confused individual who does not realize that this is fanfiction; and that you as the author (and what an AMAZING author you are) have every right to make Ron as much of a dick as you like. She's clearly so absorbed in her own befuddled world, trying to remember how to tie her shoes and the like, that she completely missed the laws of YOUR world: where Draco and the other's were completely in the right to kill someone who was trying to RAPE/KILL HARRY. As well as the laws of OUR world: Where they all had the right to self defense. And she clearly either can't remember how to get the computer screen off this story or is so STUPID she keeps forgetting she doesn't like it. Otherwise, there is no rational reason for her to keep reading and reviewing and starting shit. Just know, we all love you and think you're fabulous, so she can go screw herself.<3
person Betty
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whenever i read your chapters no matter how moody i am. They always put a smile on my face. Again thankyou for another excellent chapter. I cant wait for more!!!

Xoxx
schedule October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love this story a thousand times. harry's so cute and spunky! i can not wait till they me the malfoys.
person heartstar
schedule October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice I love how harry is with the other draks!!!!!!!!
person Bri
schedule October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my all time fav fanfictions, I've read every chapter at least twice! Thank you for all the effort you put into your writing it is greatly appericated!
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another wonderful chapter. that is a very impressive word count. All the introductions were a tad confusing but not chaotic. i loved harry's interaction with the little girls. that was adorable. and max's grandfather was a great character. I also loved that harry beat the crap out of ron.
person Anon
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Thanks for the very long chapter. It was great to read about all the families.
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazziiinnnnggggg! I don't think that introducing everyone at once was too much. But again, when they want to meet Harry's family is when it'll REALLY get interesting. xDD I can't wait for that!! And I have a crush on like half the dominants at the party. xD The guard at the children's play area, David, and that super cute flustered one behind the bar. Thanks for another awesome Chapter, and please tell "Hope" to go fuck herself. Though is it weird, that I do hope somethings actually wrong with Ron? Like part of voldemorts hate/soul somehow got lodged in him in the battle or something? I dunno I feel like something's off about him, his hate feels too strong over something so dumb. Then he feels remorse like immediately after (like with the baby) so I feel like something else is going on and he doesn't REALLY hate Harry. :/ Well, anyway, can't wait until next time! Wish you well until then!

xDD P.S. I just looked down and my captcha says "Intrigue Maximilius". Hahaha