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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh no the Dursleys. I hope Harry speaks up about them and doesn't just go back because he's again too trusting. I'm sure the first thing they would do is punch him in the stomach for 'being a freak'. I wonder, now that he's mated isn't he automatically allowed to stay with mates? Anyway I hope Harry gets tghe chance to tell them off perhaps in public to the whole neighborgood?

Anyway I love you for updating so quickly! But please don't sacrifice sleep for the sake a fanfiction if you're tired.
person unicorn53
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just want to tell you that you make my day when there is another chapter/s uploaded. I look forward to your story more and more as it grows. Please keep up the good writing. unicorn53
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
when is harry going to tell his mates the truth about his home life? i think the rundown at the end did help clear up a few things. i can not wait to read more, and please tell me the malfoys will join soon.
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i sorry if i made you mad, but i belive ron is the one that most people make into a jerk and he was never even at his worst as bad as you made him. i form american and it is 18, so yes those men would be comminting a crime and could go to jail.

since draco tried to comment first degree murder, i have reason to hate the guy.(THAT A CRIME)

your story well written, but i know this will not change anything, but why i dont mind story where ron get jeaslus, but him hitting harry and risk hurting a baby, ron would never do that.

so 3 of the 4 men would be in a jail if this was real, so yes he does have a real reason not to turst these people.

one of the things that i allwasy hated was, that in stories, thinks like the crime they commited, or law are throw out the window. sorry if i made you mad, just telling you how i feel.

person rikkairora
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I truly have to say how amazing I think this story is. I get wicked excited everytime I see a new chapter up and I've read through it all at least three times because I always find something I missed the time before. I dont review a lot, especially the well written stories but I felt the need to review this one for the simple fact that its amazing and a small joy in my life. Thank you for such a wonderful piece of work and I look forward to the upcoming chapters.
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok I am really beginning to like your stories! Please update as soon as you can but dont make yourself sick by not getting enough sleep over this. I read this story up to the most recent chapter in the past 3 days along with working 2 jobs and taking care of my daughter and fiance. I am also wondering when your going to update the Life and Trials of Harry James Potter - Malfoy that is another story that I like of yours. But I wouldnt be able to pick a favorite lol. Well I think that is all I have to say right now until your next chapter.

Brifelton09
person Bookanimeyaoiyurilover
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
They took down you story on fanfiction I am very upset about this if I could I would leve fanfic but I can not oh and p.s I love your story the best story I have read on fanfic and I been on that sight for five six years wow that a long time
person Anon
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loving the regular updates, and I'm so happy we finally get to know the sex of the baby! I hope Max gets better soon. Update soon please!
person laurels
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have just read from the start to here in the last 2 days, I have been hooked!!! This is a fabulous story, funny, sexy, sweet. It has been a great ride to get to here. I can't wait to see the Malfoy's reaction and I really like Nas being the top dominate. It is nice that becasue he is not the biggest he didn't get the job. I think they all balence out so well. I like your original characters with there different tempriments and attitudes. I must say that I Draco am really looking forward to the development between Draco and the to Dom's above him particularly when his parents find out everything. I love this and I will be one of you many fans hanging on every update! Thank you for writting this for us to love and enjoy.
schedule October 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
XD Well I don't think I'll be using Bitch or Whore anytime soon, but I'll keep that in mind!!! That last line just about killed me, about Draco shopping the feet of women with energy to spare! XD I don't think he would've appreciated the comment if he'd been there, no matter how true it may be! XD love the chapter of course! A little worried now though with the mention of the Dursley's, I think Harry needs to tell his mates what his life was really like growing up, surely they wouldn't let him go back! Man I hate those people! they just plain suck! XD anyway, wanted to jet you off a quick comment before I head to work. So lovely lovely work Dear! Glad to know I'm not a creeper! XD can't wait to see more! Poor Maxie, he'll be smothered by the time his cold's gone. lol. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! until next time darling!