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It's a boy!!!! Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just a little lol here - I think you missed Max's mom on your list!! ;)

Really enjoying this more and more every chapter!! Please tell me that the Dursleys will be punished somehow!

*bats eyelashes*

D&D means Dungeons and Dragons. It's an RPG that I play. It can get pretty graphic depending on who's running the show (Dungeon Master). They even have Mature-rated books (like the Book of Vile Darkness and the Book of Exalted Deeds). Anyhoo, I love Max's family. I'm with Harry and am curious about Richard's injury, but naturally it's all up to you whether or not it gets revealed. I can't wait to see what happens next, and the baby sounds like he's gonna be an exhibitionist when he gets older (sometimes they start early too; I've heard of toddlers who take off their diapers/training pants and run around naked; I can totally see that happening.

I love this nice long chapter. I know that it was probably quiet difficult to wright, and I am quiet grateful that you did write it; it really brightened up my night.
I am liking all of your newly introduced character, I

I always have a giggle when I read the name Sanex. Over here its a very well known brand that is mainly known for soaps. Also shampoos and lotions and such ...:P

Yay a boy!! Quite a family right there :) I'm happy Harry is settling in so well with Max's family, I'm forseeing a lot of grandparent involvement on that side! Looking forward to reading about Blaise, Draco, and Nasta finding out the baby's gender :)

~Spiritxx

It's a boy! Yea! Aren't there just going to be a ton of happy grandparents. :D I was tickled over Max's family scene, what with him being a little under the weather and all--wonder what potion he was making and if it'll have any importance to the story. With Max being a potions maker and Severus being a potions master, I can't help wondering if the two ever engage in rousing debates and discussions of potions. Might be nice for Sev to have--gasp--dare I say it?--a friend. I enjoyed the meeting of families (previous chapter?), even if it was a bit much at first. No worries, just throw us those OCs and then occasionally remind us within the pose of how everyone ties back together. We'll manage. ^_~v Promise. Still, after meeting Blaise's, Max's, and Nasta's families, I'm really interested in seeing how the Senior Malfoys react to the whole situation.

The Dursleys. [frowns] If I'm not mistaken, Voldie's gone to the ashes in this story, right? I'm remembering that right...so Harry shouldn't have to go back to Privet Dr. come the end of June or beginning of July, depending on your story's schoole schedule. But... why would the Ministry alert the guardians that a ward is expecting? What's the purpose of the plot device, and it's purpose within the history and protocals of the wizarding world, is what I'm wondering. Not to mention it would absolutely suck if I was a knocked up teenager who didn't want my folks to know and the ruddy ministry goes an informs them anyway!

Still... Draco and Blaise live at home during the holidays, but Nasta and Max have their own abode, correct? Have they discussed where they're going to live during the holidays/after the boys graduate? I can't remember. With Harry being in such a precarious position with his pregnancy, I would almost think they would want to find their home and begin building their nests. Settling in, as it were, so they have a place to go for themselves during the holidays and after graduation. I just... I can see taking the summer holidays to visit each of the in-laws. Really, I can. But I feel the overwhelming desire to have MY home, my house that will be mine and my mates and the place where we will raise our children....and... [shakes and clears head] I just totally had a first-person-Harry moment there. Sorry. That's strange, but I can even sort of picture it--little larger than a "cottage", but not a manor house either.... Rambling and quaint, with fragrant herbs and flowers spilling forth the front garden and a crooked stepping stone path that leads up to the front door. Mmm...makes me want to play the Sims and design some homes again!

Always a little thrill of happiness when I see an update. Looking forward to seeing where you'll take this. And I don't require an addressed response. Much rather see how your handle the plot instead!
~AR

In the third to last paragraph of chapter 27 I believe, you misspelled rambunctious.

Another great chapter. And thank you so much for updating, it's tough when some writers start a great story and leave you hanging.
I hope this will make you feel better; a lot of the questions you answer, I got it when reading the story. And after Goblet of Fire I didn't think Ron deserves Harry's friendship. He's a jealous, insecure prat.

Daaaaw! cute family time! I admit I'm eager for Draco's parents to meet them all. I can see Narcissa being super protective of Draco... until she see's cute little harry with a baby bump! I have no idea how his father will act. Can't wait to see!

I love this story, you writing is awesome, I cant wait for more.
Question do the dominants have sex outside of heat I dont remember seeing that in the story?