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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Harry's baby isn't going to be hurt too much by being born early is it? The gestation period for the baby had already been shortened by two months, won't a premature birth be hurtful on the health of the baby?
person avril27
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the story update love this story. I work the graveyard shift so I know the feeling the Christmas is always the busies time of the for us. Get some rest and enjoy that day off.
person cammie
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for updating on your day off!! it made my day after having a crappy start to my week! i did have a silly question though. will blaise and draco continue to get taller or did they reach their full height when they came into their inheritance?
person Jedi Wish
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I am always checking it for updates, and I have a tendancy to reread the entire story when new chapters are posted. I am sorry that you work life has been so crazy. I remember when my life was like that. Hope it gets better soon. I saw your comment about how Ron doesn't have a place in this story except as a jackass; I saw a news article where Rowling said that she almost killed off Ron in the middle of a series because she didn't like him; I don't think he was ever meant to be a good best friend. Good Writing!
person qwerty
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Once they find out, Harry's mates will probably want vengeance against the Dursleys, right?

Also, take care of yourself! You're working such long hours with little to no break in between. It's ok if you don't update this story - your health and sanity is way more important!
schedule November 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I just wanted to let you know that I love what you do. I get excited every time I see that it's updated. I know you work hard to get the updates out quickly and regularly. I hope everything is going well with you in RL. I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
When are they gonna find out about the Dursley's? Haven't they started talking about how they're gonna do the summer?
person Shadowwolf03
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well... you could have made it twins one boy and one girl (ha, ha). I like 'meeting' the parents and the interaction with Max's parents in this chapter.
person Squeeny
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I never review stories on this site, but yours deserves one. This story is just so well-written and descriptive and just wonderful. You took this idea from Jayde Alyxandre and just made it so much more! I'm so glad you took this on! Bravo!
=D
person Sareco
schedule November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story SOOOO much~ I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter and I amazed that you update so quickly with such long chapters! :)