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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Jazz
schedule November 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope that whole "the baby was still" thing doesn't mean anything bad :( now im worried.
schedule November 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Draco I hope he tells his parents more in-depth why he dint tell them he was a Dracken. Though it probably has something to do with them being all about image and how others see them. So in turn he thought him being a creature would be looked down upon. Plus his mom said she hasn't seen him smile like that since he was six?! No wonder he didn't want to tell them right away. They probably didn't let him have much childhood fun as they're obessed with image. So its partly their fault for causing such doubt in them.

I'm still curious as to who's baby it is though. If its Draco's it could potentially help slap some reality in Lucious and Narcissa. Who will have to get off their high horses. That and I'm sure Harry would claw their faces off if they ever said anything about his baby. Oh such excitement! Can't wait for the next chapters!!
person ReadyAimFire
schedule November 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, wow, wow! What a great chapter! Thanks for updating, I'm always so excited to read more!!!
schedule November 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! finally Draco looses his virginity! and to not only Nasta but Max as well. I quiet enjoyed that! I feel bad for Harry hiding what happened to him as he grew up though. I'm sure it's going to come out at some point I just hope it's not too brutal. I have a suspicion it'll be if/when Harry actually does confront the dursley's, then his mates would see what they're really like. That would not end well though. Well, I'm eager to see what comes next!
person jingko
schedule November 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! I will patiently wait for your next one. i love how you give the characters lots of life to them!
person Jazz
schedule November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been rereading this story and I realized that I've been picturing how Blaise, Nasta, and Max look wrong the whole time. *hits head* like come on! how'd I miss this?!
person marie curie
schedule November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you are taking care of yourself and getting some (from what you told us of your RL)much needed rest. The last chapter was great and a bit disturbing (rightfully so with the topic) with the memory flashback. Yes it might just be the time to kill some Dursleys right? (The books always makes me want to do something drastic when they are mentioned) It made me think of a question, does Harrys heritage with the whole magical animal edge make him react differently to punishment then as opposed to when he was fully human? Or is it more in the whole sub/dom department? Ehh that was two questions. Ups one more (only answer if you can make any sense of my ramblings (english is not my first language). Of the dominants (I think) I've noticed that only Draco has a form of punishment that can be applied to active situations (like deterring or stopping a behaviour) as well as after an incident has occured. Like the others uses different versions of controlling grips but we haven't seen them used when the fight or whatever is over. Is this something that works out between dominants, like taking different roles? Or maybe I'm overthinking it (in that case, sorry). Well I really love your stories and I'll read them as long as you want to write. I'll stick with you and the, was it 20 years? for the live and trials of hpm. All the very very best from the north!
person Zel
schedule November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
poor harry he has been through so much. I hope he recovers from the trauma. at least now he has a family who loves him. great chapter by the way. I love the nesting instincts.
person AeruneMinuit
schedule November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to wait to read everything before I finally sent in my review of the fic. I've been enthralled, having only started the story early last night. I've fallen in love with your portrayal of Harry and Draco, and am VERY glad that you chose Blaise as his other mate. I consistently feel that Blaise doesn't get enough attention in Potterverse fics. It's refreshing to see it. I also fell in love with both Nasta and Max as I read through, finding myself hoping that one, if not both of them, got chosen as I read onwards. I adore your writing style. It has a way to drag me into the story, and I found myself so entranced throughout the entire thing that I never wanted to stop reading. I adore the Dracken twist on it as well, including the twists you've thrown in. I am delighted to say that this is one of the BEST HP fics I've read on this site so far. I look forwards to see more from you in the future, and can't wait for the next chapter~

-Aerune MInuit-