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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person ReadyAimFire
schedule December 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love updates!

I was so confused as to what courgettes were...I thought maybe it was a stew or something, but then I looked it up and its zucchini! I guess we call it something different in the US!

Great chapter, can't wait to read more!

schedule December 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
write the scene... im interested.
person heartstar
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh how will harry react!?
person slash_adherent
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I completely squee'd like a crazed fan girl when I saw this updated. And OMG what an update. The idea of getting more Max and Nasta time and finally having Harry's past come into light has me on the edge of my seat in anticipation. Not to mention that this came at the most awesome times because I have a horrible dentists appointment tomorrow that I am dreading and fearing and wishing the floor would open and swallow me up so I don't have to face it. But for a little while, at least tonight, I am able to immerse myself this wonderful world you have created and not worry about it and for that I thank you dearly.

I would be open to seeing the female dracken birth. Honestly the idea had just never occurred to me because Harry is so much just not a female and requesting something that would be away from the main story seems somehow rude to the author. Whatever you wish to show me of this 'verse I am beyond gratified.

Oh and LJ is livejournal XD
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well. Har couldn't keep it hidden forever. I'm glad he has his mates to shield him. I'm also glad that the rest of the weasleys aren't being stupid and dickish about things.
person Ashley
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I, personally, don't really care about how female drakens give birth. I mean, yes, I suppose it would be interesting to compare the differences, but it would not further the story at all and I think it might mess up the pace.
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Fuck YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! heehee I want ALL Harry's mates there when he tells them EVERYTHING heehee. I am going to enjoy the next Ch heehee
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Must... Read... More...

This is the only disappointment with reading fics that aren't finished.

Brilliant so far, can't wait for the next bit!
person NessaC
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally, Harry's past is coming to light to his mates! You've certainly kept us on our toes about that one long enough.

Personally, I would be interested in reading about a female Dracken birthing scene, maybe if Armelle recounts it to Harry to give him a small inkling of how it might go? That might tie it in nicely, with Armelle, Cesear, and the baby coming over for a visit or something.

~Spiritxx
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Well Done. I read your ending author note, I would find it interesting yes, but I don't think that I would need to know about how a female dracken gives birth. Maybe in a side note or a separate story of deleted scenes for those that would like to compare.