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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw! Harry's nesting! How long will Harry nest before he's satisfied?
person Louise
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I continue to look forward to story updates but Please, take a break if you need to. I'd be sad to see you drop this story because you start hating it. I really liked the scene where he grabbed the towel and then ran off to figure out where to stash it. Wasn't he going to include some of Hermaine's knitting in his nest too? Now I'm going back to look for what I thought I read. Is Harry's nest outside? Or did I not visualize something correctly? I just assumed it would be under cover before this.
Looking forward to the next chapter when you are in the mood to write.
person shadowwolf03
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter... found it funny how Harry snuck out with his first piece of nesting materials and found a spot in relatively short amount of time. I'm going to love when a favorite clothing article or something or equal value of Draco's goes missing (ha, ha). I'd like to see Henley visit Harry's chicks and one of them gravitate towards maybe in the future have a break away story where that same chick meets and chooses Henley, I'd like to make him Harry's child even if its through marriage. But that a different story for another day or year.
person thestralhorse
schedule December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww poor Harry!! I love Nasta and Max they keep it together because they love Harry so much!!
person Kaygie
schedule December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So I've been thinking really hard about what I'd like to see either in a side story or in the story itself, and I finally came up with what I think would be a pretty interesting and relevant scene. I don't think the boys or their families understand just how powerful Harry is. I mean, if he isn't going to tell them about his abuse he isn't just going to be like, "Yeah, how bout that time I slayed a friggin Basilisk, bithces?" So I'd like to see a scene where Harry has to display his power and training. Like, Max accidentally blows up the oven/a potion and Harry throws up a quick wandless, wordless, shield spell to protect him and everyone else. Or they chat with Ginny or Hermione and they tell them about the Basilisk and I REALLY want Hermione to tell them about riding out of Gringotts on the Dragon (if you can work that actually happening into your story, I can't remember if it did happen or not
person karen
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i like your story u have a author who wrote under your last story andrea redwolf i think it was can u send me a link to her page or have her e-mail me her page please thank you
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I feel like I won a lottery or something! :D 1000! Congrats! This chapter was well done, even if it was shorter than most. I liked how reluctant Harry was to speak about his trauma, because it reflects how real child abuse victims are.

I also liked the Nasta and Maz scene at the end.. so sweet! :D

Ciao!
SI
person SilverLion
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What if Drackens foraged for nesting material, instead of taking whatever was nearby? Kinda like birds (especially bower birds). Those posters or that horrid orange bedspread of Ron's could still be nesting materials (though the bedspread might cause nightmares due to the color alone).

I'd like to see Henley again (he was that really adorable baby-dom, right?). Maybe for Harry's next birthday he could visit? Henley = kawaii!

Just a reminder to Max, Nasta, Draco and Blaise (once the last two hear about the Jerkleys): Vernon, Petunia, Dudley, and Marge (I include her because she's such a bitch) will not be good to eat. Neither is Umbitch, for that matter. Ptomaine is no fun guys (and that's from the horse's mouth).
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story! It gets better and better every chapter! I cant wait for the deleted scenes either. Im so glad you keep writing for us and cant wait for the next chapter ^_^
person Kawaiiyashie
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter cant wait for the next one. You should just name it rise of the drackens the story behind the sceens or out takes either way i will be reading it!