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If I said this story didn't alter my life I'd be lying. I go around categorizing people. I've made lists of threesomes and foursomes of my friends and the people they like, who would be top dominant and submissive and fertility based on their parents' fertility. Earlier I explained to mi amiga that she would probably would've turned out as a dominant female and she looked at me as if I had gone mad. I began reading this about 3 days ago and since I don't have much time to read during the day, I spent my time from 12 to 5 or 6 morning time reading this. I'm very much awaiting your next instalment darling, good luck. I'm going to busy myself with rereading it over so I catch anything I may have missed and also to pass the time until your next update. Please don't stress yourself out with writing, I understand the feeling of caring what your readers think, but priorities also come first. Sleep should be the first thing on your list if not eating. If you need three or four months to recooperate then so be it, I don't know about anyone else but I don't mind waiting that long. Stay healthy and keep working hard!

"nothing brought on the start of a labour quicker than a surprise party, except perhaps a vindaloo curry."

ROTFLMAO!!! Loved this line!!!

I love this series so much. Each and every update is such a treat.

Could Harry possibly be pregnant with twins? Just seems like the thing that would happen to him. Ya know - surprise!baby lol

I hope Harry doesn't go into early labour or that his mates find his nest, but on the bright side doesn't matter what you write we will more then likely love it. Looking forward to more action in the New Year, hope you have a good one =)

I'm sorry I missed the previous chapter. I love what Harry's doing in regards to nesting. I hope he apologizes later for getting the others in trouble, since he didn't mean to. Can't wait to see what happens next. Will Harry be in the nest on his birthday or will the party go on as planned? I'm so excited.

rry has really hurt his wing huh? When will they notice

I am quite enjoying your story. I find it very intriguing. I find myself waiting on the edge of my seat for the next installment. I would like to thank you for taking the time to post this online for others to enjoy too. So thank you. :) But I do have a question about the story for you. I was hoping it would be answered in the newest chapter but I found that it wasn't. So here it is...

So Harry was outside at his nest and then he came inside. His feet were dirty, correct? So he had gone upstairs and washed them before he had vomited and passed out. So here is my question. Wouldn't he have left a trail of dirty foot prints leading from outside to the bathroom? Wouldn't his mates find it and want to know why he was outside? They didn't know that he was building a nest yet, so why wouldn't they wonder why? Especially if he dropped his core temperature by being outside?

Sorry for the long question. It was just bugging me. I hope you had a great Christmas and have a wonderful New Year.

Once again thank you for writing your story. Have a pleasent day.

I can not wait for the next Ch! I NEED IT NOW!!!!!!! lol

you r perfectly entitled t enjoying your x mas. really I'm surprised we got one at all. an update i mean. most writers take a powder or give us a token... which suppose you have here huh. still, an update is an update so its all good.
how long will har nest build for and where will he get the materials? He can't go far in his state.

Wow! I wasn't expecting another chapter until after the New Year, next week sometime. But, I am glad you didn't leave us hanging on the cliff too long. Even though the chapter was shorter than some of the others it's still let us know that Harry's health and the baby are doing okay once more and the nest building continues (ha, ha). Nasta's going to have his hands full with Draco who's inquisitive by nature and Blaze is bound to be concerned as well but usually has slightly more self control. So, I look forward to the next chapter moving on towards Harry's Birthday celebration and then nesting and birth before the new school year.

I love this story!! I have to agree, I've found a lot of really good stories that have been left hanging for a long time and it is frustrating (and a bit disappointing). I hope the guys will be able to keep their curiosity in check, what would happen if someone else (like from Max's family) caught sight of Harry nesting? I await your next chapter!