AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person topsee22
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i loooovvvvveeeeeeee this story!!!!!! its baby time, i can't wait to see how harry gets through the delivery of the baby because when he firs found out that he was a dracken and would deliver his own baby ne was nervous....glad everything is coming so naturally to him
person sangrosa
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love what you have done with this story. But I just realized someone is missing and hasn't shown up since the start of the story. . . What happened to Remus?

Here's to hoping the next update comes soon enough,
sangrosa <3

P.S. No pressure, just hoping for it :P
person sangrosa
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't mean to put pressure or anything btw. I put it as a P.S. but it didn't show. Hope everything gets better for you.
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter!!
I hope Draco's the father, might make Luc warm up to Harry a little quicker. :)
On a random note; I just realized that the Dominance order is exactly opposite of the mating order. xD

:( I'm sorry I hope whatever's going on in you life works out soon, remember we love you!!!!
person LadyDeath39
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oooh Harry is in his nest, not long now till the baby is born but i bet something happens, i mean something always happens, and for the Father Draco but since at the time when Harry got pregnant his dracken had rejected Draco and Harry didn't know about Max so maybe Blaise but still vote for Draco as the father so then his family will come into the story more and the fact the a Drarry baby would be soo cute =D
P.S Take your time sorting out your private life it is so mush better to dill with it all at once then work your way though it, WE *your readers* will be waiting wall the best till the next update =)
person ulla
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I'm pretty obsessed with it and I keep checking my bookmarks to see if it's been updated. I think your original character are my favourite, and I loved the time we got to spend learning about Harry's mates. As for who I want to be the baby's father... well, I think Draco if only because I want Lucius to warm up to the family, or maybe Max, but that might just be because I love Max so much.

I hope I'm not the only one who just adores hearing how Harry is different from other submissives, about how he's so special. That and his nest building adventures have been the cutest thing. Klepto-Harry is adorable.

Anyway, looking forward to the next update. Thank you so much for sharing such quality writing and storytelling with us!
schedule January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Carry on as you need. Anyone who writes fanfiction knows EXACTLY how problematic RL can be when writing. It interferes with EVERYTHING! Published authors have the same problem. I wonder how much trouble Rowling had while writing the books? There may have been computer crashes, or car troubles, or what have you. So, you do what you need to do. I'll be waiting patiently for you to return.
person djaddict
schedule January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My vote is for Draco.

Sorry to hear you are having troubles. Hope everything works out alright for you.
person heartstar
schedule January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH poor harry can a dracken get a sun burn on his ass? lol I hope the birth goes well.
person Jazz
schedule January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Do what you need to do. I'll be waiting for the next chapter whenever it comes. There's no rush.