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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Sera21
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cute chapter...I was wondering why Harrys mates were not more sexually active though? I mean both Nasta and Max hadn't had sex in a month and Draco...well at the beginning of the chap when he was turned on by teh laugh he said a month and then later on he said he had sex a week ago with Blaise so not sure on that one but still...a week! Its a bit unrealistic( if one can use that word)for a teenage boy to go a week not to mention a month(!!) without sex when it is so clearly available. Its always been my impression that Teenage boys have the kind of hormones that can let them have sex 6 times a day and still get horny a 7th time. And even men in their mid thirtys have sex more then once a month when they are in a relationship! Why are they so unsexual??? Does it have something to do with teh baby??
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! Ok so this is the first time im reviewing this story even though ive been following this story from the beginning. This is my favorite chapter so far, I loved the birthing too I thought it was so interesting. And I was surprised that the baby was Blaise's only because at first I thought it was Max's just because I read that he had blue eyes. Although it does make sense that Blaise would be he father of harry's first hold since he was Harry's first mate. Oh and I laughed so hard I cried when Draco almost caused max to birth a kiitten when he said he took Blaise on Max's precious kitchen counters. I have never laughed hat hard! Please update soon
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
why do their instincts say to keep her away? does the trauma caused to her some how cling or is it everyone their instincts say to keep away? considering how the female mummy is acting, i can see har easily becoming a fave.
heh, poor draco. still he's going to have to get used to it. ^^ do they have to be gentle with har or is it instinct again... though, i suppose compared to them, Har is tiny.
is Mio still around or did she get shipped home?
can't wait to see what they call the kid. ^^
person kawaiiyashie
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! You just made my day I have been waiting for it and I just decided to refresh the browser and there it was. Thanks for making my birthday awsome so early this morning! It made me so happy to finally read the next chapter.
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that girl is going to kill herself and the baby isn't she? I can just tell something bad is going to happen like that.
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
XD yay...i hoped Blaise would be the father of this one! XD

and to your comment about Caesarean...it is named after Caesar XD some legend about him being the first Caesarean or something like that...
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
:D I was so excited to see two updates so close together! It made my weekend. The Nasta/Max scene has been i the back of my mind, waiting to come out... thanks! :D By the way, the reason that Caesarian section begins with the name Caesar is that it is named after the myth that Julius Caesar was born in this fashion. Of course, it's probably not true, but a good story anyway!

Thanks!

SI
person djaddict
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Liked the Ashleigh situation and how Harry handled it. Amelle needs a spanking.

Blaise first daddy! Draco is still kindof a pratbut I liked how he thought ofthe baby as his.

You are still evil but in a good way!
person Wolfmistress
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. I especially liked the scene between Harry and Ashleigh. Will we see the Malfoy and Lychorinda families reactions in the next couple of chapters? I can't wait to read Blaise's reaction to his son.
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it is a sweet chapter and well done. i can't wait for nasta's father and brother or blaise's mom to come over. i was suprosed only max's family was there and not a crowd although that might have been a little too overwhelming. good job.
michelle