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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Anon
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!
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schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I thought I was going to get my daisy chain there for a minute LOL, great chapter,loveit once again and the nameis perfect : )
person Nicola
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! I loved it!!!!!!! CAN NOT wait for the next one! lol
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent The development is appropriate and all the chapter more than hot is cosy. Beautiful welcome back to Harry of a real family
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ty for the explanation and also for your up dating efforts. we do appreciate them, swear! well, i do any way. >>
btw, what's a cwtch? is it like a type of cuddle? you used it twice so i'm hoping it';s not just a typo and i'm making a fool of myself.
i hope luc and cissa get a bit more mentally flexible, enough to accept their son's new family cause draco really does miss em much.
heh, har always wanted family, not he's part of several. ^^

btw, do you mind if i borrow this particular dracon set up (the world it's set in anyway) to host one of my fics? I had an idea but i don't want to run with it until i got permission, cause it's not just the dracon idea i want to borrow, it's YOUR particular dracon set up.
anyway my email is ckestra@hotmail.com if you want to discuss it more.
person Rachel
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic! I check AFF all the time to see if you've updated. I read other stories, but I'm really just waiting for more of this one! Absolutely love it. I'd love if you could recommend some of the fics that you enjoy or ones that give you inspiration for this story!
I love seeing Harry with four other mates taking care of him. Seeing them helping him overcome the abuse and lack of self worth is great. I also enjoy seeing them dominating him (-; My favorite lemon so far was where Harry convinced Nasta to take him before the heat and Nasta was so dominant and controlling. I'd love to see more of that. I would love to see more of the domination and control aspects in their sex lives. Maybe a little something from Ginny's box of toys! I think a bondage scene with Max and Nasta dominating Harry would be crazy hot and believable since they are both very dominant and mature enough to use bondage safely without hurting Harry. But, lemons or not, I love reading your story! Thank you so much for all the time and effort you put into this! I hope it's as rewarding for you as it is enjoyable for me to read it!
person qwerty
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter!!! I love the baby name.
Great job!
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love the fact that Max was worried because they had cooked breakfast on the counter they had sex on! That was fantastically funny! Great job!
person SB
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. Thanks for this awesome story.
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chapter like I already knew I would! No idea what you were so worried about, it turned out amazing! Love the name!