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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person EmeraldEyed
schedule April 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah, good that I found you on aff! I'm not sure if your story was taken down from FF or if you took it down, but I am still an avid fan and will try my best to keep up with it on this site too!
schedule April 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Following you over from FFNet! :( Really angry about what happened, on your behalf. Was the story reported? Or was it one of those flukes where FFNet managed to find it themselves? :(
person Kelei
schedule April 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Did this get removed from ffnet? I was halfway through when BAM, story gone.
person Janna
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I had a idea. You should have Harry use his Dracken blood to heal Remus of being a warewolf, and then because being a warewolf suppressed his magical inheritance he turns out to be a male submissive Dracken. Then pair him up with Snape and maybe Nasta's father then they would all be one happy family.iGr
schedule March 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, thank you. I love when Harry's Slytherin side comes out. Perhaps Harry should follow Max's suggestion from a few chapters back and get the naughty mediwitch outfit he talked about. I would love to see a D/s playscene between Nasta and Harry now that Nasta has introduced a bit of kink between them. You write wonderful scenes. I also wanted to tell you how much I appreciate you add the small replay of the last chapter before starting the new one. It is very helpful.

On a side note, something probably better for Scaled Bits would be a look into the quality time Harry has with each of his dominants individually and maybe some quality the dominants have with each other.

Enjoy your time away and have lots of fun. I look forward to the next installment.
schedule March 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love love love this story!!!! it is a great story and it is wonderfully written. keep up the great work.
schedule March 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WOW love love love it, boy did Harry get what ws coming to him, in spades even LOL, the daisy chain was great, thanks so much for indulging me : ) can't wait to see where you go with this next as you have it wide open for any direction from here
person thestralhorse
schedule March 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was great!! the cheesy pick up lines were just hilarious and max getting squished under everyone else was awesome!!
person Nicola
schedule March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
BRILLIANT!!!!!! Totally worth the wait!!! Roll on the next 2 weeks, can't wait to read more! Loved the skirt and undies, please let Harry get more?! :)
schedule March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh, my, lol. go harry. way to get what you want. btw, is that healing normal or is har just doing his relatively rapid healing thing again?

That guy in the loo though, seriously, what was his damage? I've never heard so many bad pickup lines, magical or otherwise. Har even told him he was taken! seriously, some people.

the lemons later, that five way was just oh, wow. It was nice to see them getting some 'exercise' all five of them, outside of heat. In heat i don't think they'd get to appreciate it properly. this way was simply the pleasure giving and seeking of loving mates. I hope we get to see more of it. I'm sure they'll get more co cordinated with practice... and har definately needs more of those knickers and skirts... >>

Neh, would har's wards on his 'nest' keep things like bugs and spiders out, cause they just love the sort of conditions his nest would have, for making nests of their own.