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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person T
schedule September 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I know Sev died but a gurl can hope (hes just such a fun character). could just be I see Draco and Blaise as 'finished'.

anyways really liking Nasta in these last few chapters. Im super excited to see what Leolin's side of the family will bring.

Cheers!
person Tat5934
schedule September 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see the new house through Harry's eyes. Hopefully he will be fine sooner rather than later.
Poor Nas! He's really exhausted! He's a really good dominant.
I would love to see how Draco cope with all this drama... maybe we will see him in the next chapter :-)
person Anon
schedule September 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh please update soon! I love this story and want to see Draco and the group reunited!!! Will he come back in the next chapter? Or will we get to see some of his counselling?
schedule September 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
My goodness this was a great update. congrats on your nomination and hope you win. Love this story this is my favorite. Can not wait till you get the next chapter done you left s hagging a bit but that is ok. That is what writers do.
person autumngold
schedule September 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your fabulous new chapter! I am so glad that Harry and Blaise are now home, hopefully things will start going better for them. I can't imagine what Draco is going through, the guilt that he almost killed his submissive and injured their children must be killing him. Plus the fact he actually killed Blaise has to be eating him up inside. Your story is wonderful! Can't wait to see what you have planned for the family next!
person COCOKE5
schedule September 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I JUST LOVE THE STORY AND THE CHAPTER THAT U HAVE BEEN PUT UP HERE AND CAN NOT WAIT FOR MORE AND SEE WHAT HAVEN NEXT THE LIVE OF HARRY AND HIS FAMILY AND THE KIDS I WAS SAD WHEN U HAVE BLAZIE DIE AND THEN IT WAS JUST AND 6 MIN SO WHAT DO U HAVE NEXT FOR THEM AND MORE ON DRACO AND HARRY CASE .
person starr
schedule September 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
thanks so much for the update, so happy to see Harry back home !!!!!! man what is going to happen to Draco, they are not talking about him to much !!!????? thanks again and see you soon :):):)
person nightCat09
schedule September 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay Harry and Blaise are home now! Hopefully that means the kids can start to settle down again since they'll be able to see Harry, even if it's only one-on-one.

I have a feeling Nasta and Max will get their wish to keep Blaise mostly in the nest bed of couches by using him to help keep Harry still and from straining himself. :)

I don't really have much to say, other than I loved it and eagerly await more. ;) But I know it'll be at least a few weeks while you get your other updates out. :) Keep up the great work!
schedule September 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved the crack Harry made about Nasta's beard being like a Brillo pad when he was giving Harry kisses! I feel exactly the same about beards.
schedule September 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter!
So glad that Blaise and Harry are back home, I cannot wait until Harry has healed enough to explore the new house! I know it will probably not happen all in one day, it'll probably take Harry a couple of days to fully explore the house, seeing as he won't be able to stand or walk for any extended amount of time. But I'm still looking forward to reading his reactions and to finally get a little tour of their new home. :D

I'm glad that the children have finally went down for their naps easily, the bond Harry has with his kids is just amazing, I hope they start to heal now that their mother is back home with them! :D

And I hope that the visit with Dain and Kailen goes well, and hopefully they won't have to deal with the courts until Harry has fully healed, or at least healed enough where he can walk and stand and doesn't have to take the potions anymore. :D

Looking forward to the next chapter! And I'm so excited for this month's and October's updates! Don't push yourself, we can easily wait for the next updates! :D