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Thank you for giving us a new chapter. I was very upset that you got dinged on FFN and had to take down/repost your story. Thank you for continuing to post here and for sticking with the story and giving us a new chapter. This is my number one fav n AFF.Net :) Great chapter had me squeeing all over.

Its a cute chapter but I am worried that you are making Harry act a bit to...logical. I mean how realistic is it for a 16 year old to realize moment after a fight that he was in fact at fault in everything and then go out and apologise the next morning. I realize Harry is mature but he seems to never ever be selfish and always seems to consider his mates feelings and their feelings in their actions.Why couldn't harry have acted a bit more human and just have been grumpy for a day or two? I realize that it may be a question of juggeling 5 main characters and half of the chapter will inevitably be spent with one mate telling another mate what just happened but I do wish you could give your chracters more depth by making them a bit more ...human...they all seem so perfect except maybe Draco. What if Nasta had a habit of trying to over protect harry by telling him white lies or if Max really really wanted to make sure the next baby was his...? At this point they are just sweet, caring, wholesome and, unfortunatly, starting to get a bit boring...

so good love it poor harry was doing so good dame draco want more

You made my day! I'm so happy for a new chapter and Happy Birthday ROTD. You are doing a wonderful job of keeping me interested and panting for what is to come. Harry is feral. Will he be able to once again overcome his Draken as he has in the past or has this little episode made it harder for him. The question is how much of this chapter was foreshadow and how much was color. Hmmmm, inquiring minds will find out (hopefully) in the next chapter.

I love the relationships between Harry and Alexander, Nasta and Blaise. With Alexander, Harry is getting the grandfather love he never had before. With Blaise, Harry has that first, young, romantic love and with Nasta, someone who gives him the love, security and stability that Harry hasn't had. Draco and Max need to learn to put brain in gear before putting mouth in motion.

As you can see, I love the story and characters. Thank you for all your hard work on this story, for the update and I look forward to the next chapter whenever you can post it. At a chapter a week (with Scaled Bits), you are doing a bang up job.

YAY! A new chapter! I was so excited to see this!!!! Ok, so Harry is now going to go just as crazy as all of the other mothers are about their children? Hmmm... I hope not = ) I loved Alexander and how he seems to be doting on Harry. Lol Harry needs all he that he can get! = ) I loved the newest chapter and I'm sorry that you've been so stressed due to fanfiction.net and all. I hope you don't have to go through all of that again any time soon! = ) I can't wait to see/read the rest of Alexander's birthday party and Harry's (maybe) better realization of the fact that Braiden will be ok with the old biddies = )

Hi! Just wanna say I LOVE your story, and that I hope everything is OK. I also wanna know when the next chapter will be up.

But really, this story is AWESOME! Truly.

I always feel so bad for stories like this, that have been abandoned by their author. You're a good writer but you really should finish what you start. A good example of what I'm talking about is your other long story. If you aren't going to finish it you should put it up for adoption and you really should consider updating this story soon.

This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. I am hoping that you continue and soon with more to this story. Please do!!

please make a new chapter i have been waiting very patiently and i love your story.

Hi I just wanted to let you know, that I truly love your story. I must have read it atleast 20 times by now. I cant wait for the updates. I hope you are doing well ta ta for now.