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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Sera21
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wait, WHAT? Nasta burnt Harrys little skirt?? Wow, I can't believe he is such a prude...in fact all of them! Instead of enjoying Harrys minor foray into looking sexy and enticing his mates, they are looking for a way to put a stop to it by burning and removing them...:( This story already borders on being a bit to much on the sugary sweet/ fluffy side with every little problem solved within a chapter and love and hugs all around and I was so happy that you introduced some "fun play" in wich Harry attempted to seduce his mates...but apparently they think of him more as a son then a lover as they want to hide his sexuality even when it is only among the group --___-- argh...
person sarahlouise
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Worth the wait!!
I love Alexander and Myron... just love the huge family concept!!
I hope Harry doesn't turn out like those other submissive mothers, but can't wait to read where you go with this.
Usually after so many chapters a story gets boring and just drags out, but ROTD is addictive and has such a strong plot with amazing characterization that I can honestly say I'm addicted to this story and crave to read more!!
Keep up this good work and Congratulations for getting past the fanfiction drama.
Sarah Louise Jones xx
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Praise the fanatics gods! I was so happy when I saw that you updated that I did a little dance! This was so worth the wait too, Alexander is one of my favorite characters especially when he's with Harry. I can't wait for more! Oh and whats ur addy for Facebook? I can't seem to find u *sob*

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schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love that you're back!! It seems because of Draco's word fumble Harry will be just as protective as those other female subs. Or bimbos as Max calls them. I've also seen those baby leashes in real life and every child looks miserable. Harry should set them all free!! Lol that would be funny to see.
person mnfm
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm so glad your back and this chapter is great. I loved the interaction with the new family. I can't wait for the next one.
person Ingar
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating. I've been waiting for ages for the next chapter. But it's been worth it. It's great. I feel sorry for Harry that he was sent to bed without food and I do hope that something like that never happens again. And I just love Max's family. They're awesome and his dad is such a lovely man. I think he's my favourite in that family, if you don't count Max of course. I would really love to know more about all the aunts and uncles in the family.
I can understand Harry's fear at the end of the chapter. It was really stupid of Draco to use the word smother - Someone should hit him for it. But I understand Harry's reaction very well. I just hope he doesn't turn out like all the other submissives that won't let anyone near their chicks. I mean, that's what sets Harry apart from the rest of them and that is what makes him Harry. And I find it adorable that he trusts other people with his precious baby. Please don't take that away from him.
I hope it won't take as long before the next chapter comes out because I really want to read about the rest of the party.
person ArtemisEarth
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for going to all that effort to repost this story. I'm loving it! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Will Harry ever let anyone hold his child again? Will Alexander like the statue? Will Braiden still be just as cute? Find our next time on Rise Of The Drackens! :D:D:D
person Grim1989
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, I'm now following u on here, I'm fron Fanfiction.
person Nicola F
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
BRILLIANT!!!!! Well worth the wait!!!!!!!!!! but now i CAN NOT wait for the next chapter lol
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just gotta say how awesome this story is. I like found it one night after work, and I just finished reading what was up at at about four this morning. Then I woke up, and like was cruising the website, and there was another chapter... and I was like... holy hell i've died n gone to heaven... Wooooo... Sooo, yeah, so awesome. Figured I'd through this review here really fast before work. :D Story is super awesome, and all that jazz, but i'm sure may other people have told ou that. whatev's though... :D Yeah. Totally awesome. My demon llama's bow down to your greatness. Can't wait for more.