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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Ca Cohel
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aww. I loved this chapter. Thank you do much for updating - it feels like its been ages since the last time. I do hope it doesn't take as long to get the next one out.
Braiden is just adorable. Now that you've given him Blaise's eyes can't you give him Harry's hair? I would love to see all the scenes where - especially Draco - will curse that mopp of hair. It would drive him mad ^^
It's really cute how you introduce Max's family and I would love to hear more about them. And I love that Myron seemed to have loosened up while chasing his son around. That was hilarious. And Alexander is such a nice man too. He really seems to adore Harry - like everyone else of course.
But please - don't let Harry become like those other overprotective submissives. It would feel so wrong if that happened. I mean, Harry may not always be the most logical one out there but he even said that it's more like a prison (or however he put it) for the chicks to be treated like that. Please don't let him become like that. It would hurt so much to read. Fine of it's just for a chapter or two - but he has to snap out of it. Please *puppy dog eyes*
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If I haven't said so before, I love this fic, and the work you've put into it, including the details, like family we'll only see once.
person everyone96
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i love this story i almost had an heart attackt when i didden find the story on my fav list on fanfiction.net. but then i fundt it agein lcky :D cant wait to read the nexst chapter bet it gonna be amezing :D <3
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 45 is awesome! When will Draco learn to think before he speaks?

P.S. My fanfic account is SevLoverKat. Just so you know.
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol dunno why i have not read this one..
xD i got confused with all the posts at fb i guess. xD hope Harry does not turns into a psycho mom...
:$ he has shown a great control of his instincts in the past..
so hopefully it is just the scare. tnk u
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hate when a story gets removed.. Hope this time they'll leave it alone.. Great Chapter K
person roosickle
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so happy to see you back : ) great chapter , Happy Birthday ROTD for Saturday ........love the fort time for Harry an Braiden , and the birthday party was wonderful
person ranni
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awesome new chapter. Love when harry gets to meet his mates families.... so cute when they carry harry around. Can't wait to see more!
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow will harry calm down again ois somthing comming that he can since?
person imsandir
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay a new chapter!!! I was so happy to see a new chapter for Rise of the Drackens, I am really enjoying this story, I love the interaction between Harry & his mates. Can't wait to read more, it is one of my favorite fics right now. This chapter was great as usual, I really hope Harry doesn't become one of those overprotective subs because of Draco's slip of the tongue.