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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Jazz
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy your back. The last two chapters have been wonderful and I can't wait to find out more about Harry's second baby.
Love it, love you, can't wait for the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
HA HA! That's great! Harry's knocked up again! [snickers] No, I litterally busted out laughting. Scared the cat and everything. ^__^ And excited about it, too. Though, guess I'll have to go back and reread a few chapters because I don't actually remember a big sex scene in recent terms.

Like the family; love Alexander. Sorry but understanding of Myron's and Richard's stoniness/reaction to Harry dissing their mate like that, but I hope they get over themselves soon enough to apologize. Especially since I get the peculiar feeling Harry's carrying their grandchild. Yeah, very strong feeling that Max is the daddy this time...less it's twins. ^_^ I'm always up for the torture that is twins! Especially so fricking close together--I mean, damn! Cruel, author, cruel!

And, seriously... I keep wanting Harry to just kick some serious psycho-bitch butt and open up a whole can of you-best-not-come-around-here-anymore up on Amelle. Don't care that I kinda, sorta like Ceasar...

Um, A-6 sounds good, but then so does B-12 ^__^ Too bad B wasn't a choice!

~AR

PS--baby/babies okay, right? Even with the tummy-kick?
person Sarah
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... 6- A! I'm not sure what it's for but there you go! Ok! I actually really liked the chapter. Of course, I don't like that Myron and Richard were mean to Harry and I'm not quite sure how I feel about Harry being pregnant again so soon but I am sure you have a plan for all of this lol and the story has been great so far! I can't wait to read more and to find out what the mysterious numbers and letters are for!
person SM
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I have been impatiently waiting for the new updates!

Also, D-12
person Jasmyn G.
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I can't believe you did that,ahh I hate cliff hangers but it was an amazing chapter you are an amazing writer oh and D-12.
person Kit
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
D2
I loved it. i was very happy to find this update. Great job, i was saddend by how harry was treated, but i understand. You have a plan and i trust you to make this amazing. You have done very well. I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Shadowwolf03
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the last two chapters Alexander's birthday and Control. I did find at least one correction that you might need t make to Chapter 46 Control.

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schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
damn damn damn damn damn DAMN!!!!!!!!

Why did you have to stop the story right their!!!!!

I can just see the next chapter harry loses the baby because of the stupid girl and max parents causing him emotional stress . please i beg of you don't do that to poor poor Harry and the little baby.

I really hope you update soon that 3 month period of no updates was killer i think i checked like everyday for a new update.

here's some good luck thrown at you on a new chapter
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
As usual, another wonderful chapter! Your characters are so well thought out. I have no writing talent at all, but do love a good story! Thank you for all the hard work you do, it is appreciated!
person Jan
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So happy your back and updating ^_^ I absolutely love this story, and have since it started ^_~
LOL, I'm wishing it many more birthdays if the future as well... or sequels, which ever I'm not picky ^_^

Please update chapter 46 soon :D