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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person forgotten
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
L-12
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
iafjeaugriefkdjkaj nooooooooooo YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THIS
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
btw chapter was amazing as always. Seriously it was so perfect.
person hotflower901
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A most excellent chapter. It amazes me at the stories that get to stay up on the fanfiction site. Harry is growing and changing. So are his mates. Thank you for not abandoning this story. I know that it has not been easy.
person TheLwilliams90
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!
D-10
person Irishangel2
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story!!!! I can't wait for the last chapter!! Fantastic imagination!! And also ..... Z-6. :D
person Alicia
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness i hope harry will be alright and he pregnant again oh my i hope the baby will be ok max and the others will go crazy if he loses the baby. darn you for ending it thier ic ant wait to read the next chapter.
person gojyo_lover20
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
L-10, please u gotta update soon,i wanna see their reactions to harry being pregnant,and please do something about amelle she's so annoying.oh and when is snape going to find out about reg?
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, now we know why Harry went feral so easily. His Draken knew he was pregnant even if Harry didn't. Hopefully it will also teach Harry not to be so quick to judge. I wonder what the mark on his stomach is as it doesn't appear that Amelle got to Harry's stomach and the red mark is slightly larger than her shoe. Amelle got Harry in the head and perhaps the back but as he had curled up on himself, she couldn't have kicked him in the stomach. That leaves either too soon to be pregnant again and his body isn't sufficiently healed or his body is healed already due to how powerful Harry is and the baby will be fine.

So, the answer to the question the reporter asked is, yes, I am pregnant again. Three possible Daddies as Draco didn't get his shot at Harry but I'd like to see Harry have 2 - one of each for Nasta and Max. I'm torn as to whether I want to see Harry keep or lose the baby. Either way, the story will continue to be compelling.

Myron and Richard as acting so immaturely. I hope Alexander gave it to them good. I'm very disappointed in both of them. Tsk, tsk. That Harry was willing to come back under control should have been rewarded. As Alexander pointed out, Harry is still so young and when you add his wretched childhood, he's doing quite well with control. Wonder if Amelle will learn her lesson this time.

I love this story for the rich characters, interesting plot and laughs. Thank you so much for all your hard work.

L-6

schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Happy Almost Birthday. It really doesn't seem like it has been that long.

I don't know whether to outright hate Amelle or strongly dislike her with a side order of sympathy.

Awesome Cliffhanger. Bet that was what everyone wanted to hear (especially Myron and Richard; they're gonna feel like douche bags for makin' a pregnant submissive cry over being over-emotional about their child...ahh, hormones).

Great Chapter!

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