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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Syreen
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the answer! :)

I really liked this chapter, there were drama, love, and more drama... and Cassander (I think I like him :D). Till this point I didn't have much problem with Amelle, now I want to slap her. Hard. Poor Harry, I hope the baby will be all right.

L-12
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A-12 Great Chapter!
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
12 D
person Nicola F
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!!!!
Cant believe harry's preggers again! I hope myron and richard pull the heads out their arsess soon!
person Russel
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Yay new baby! Lol. Oh, and D-6
person addiena saffir
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I thought he wouldn't be able to get pregnant again so soon? It came out of the blue too and i thought you were going to let the dom's know that Harry wouldn't be pregnant back to back not prove their theory right. I wouldn't think that Harry's body could handle a pregnancy and if he looses it they would all be so horribly depressed and not be the same at all.
person addiena saffir
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A-6
person A
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Like it! I totally got the "food baby" joke. I hope the new baby wasn't hurt by Amelle's attack. Looking forward to reading more about Ceasar putting her in her place. I hope they can have a happy ending, too.
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thankies I added u on Facebook! Ok holy crap! I was so blind sided by the ending of this chapter that if I hadn't of been on the bus I would have sworn. I hope the baby is okay! If that bitch killed it I swear I want her hanged! No seriously I don't like her. But I like this chapter, it's nice to see Harry lose it every once in a while, to show that Harry is indeed a Draken when he normally doesn't act like one should. update soon!

Green
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 46 is awesome. Harry's pregnant again? That's way too soon... even for drakens... just goes to show that harry's special. Send me a message, will you?

Letters and numbers.... Hmm. D-12.