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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Elaine Lupin
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was a really good twist! This story is so good that I can just read it over and over again! That is just poor Harry's luck to get pregnant again so soon. He'll be happy about a new baby sure, but the whole being pregnant again so soon seems kinda dangerous. You are easily my favorite Harry Potter author! There was another author, but she finished her trilogy and then took it down later. I'm just glad I saved the story to my computer before it went away. I've saved your story too. You are doing a great job so don't let anyone tell you otherwise! At this point in the story the only problem I see is the whole health issue on Harry's part. I really hope he doesn't lose a baby because I don't think his really young Dracken could take such a loss. Keep up the good work!
person Silver
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I hope Harry doesn't loose the baby. If that happens I don't think Max or Harry's mates will forgive Amelle. Heck! I don't think Alexander's whole family will forgive her. I also hope that Myron and Richard apologize and feel guilty at what they did. They really need to apologize. I hope you update soon.
Ok. I choose 12 and D.
person Stephanie
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
L - 12
person djaddict
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved two chapters at once!

Pregnant again? Really? Give the poor boy a break!

And...

D-6
person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
D-6 yay!
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i dont see what is to hate. did he have a miscarriage? please no. thats sad. but i like the drama. maybe next time he can kill Amele. she such a bitch.

Please update really really soon. like tomoz. even if its a short chapter just explaining the "youre pregnant" bomb shell :)

i love Rise of the Drackens. I've been following it for like forever
:)
xx
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
D12
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A-10
Update soon! Poor Harry; that bitch is gonna get it.
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm picking 10 L
Wonder what the game is?????

Updates!!!! And two!! You are amazing as always, hope you didnt tire yourself out with the rewrite on fanfiction.
Your eager readers have been dying for something to read and since the first update happend while I was at work I just had to read it straight away!!!!!! Yes the iphone is mostly used for following the updates.... its impossible to wait!
Loved Alexanders party with the fun and crazy family, Alexanders the best, great charachter and the story gets more depth with each chapter, the bit about the uncle who went insane was really good and touching.
Control, kill Amelle!!! Horrible bitch that she is, hope Harry gets a bigger piece of her next time, like her head....
Oh but horrible cliffhanger!!!! Please dont kill the new baby, I got so afraid, last time the babyscare was bad and that was only human Ron punshing him, is it gonna survive Amelles attack?
Poor Harry, evil Myron to not see how hard he is struggling (but I think they should cut Harry some slack, letting other people, even family, hold your newborn isnt easy, your still struggling with the hormones and the fact that the baby spent the last months IN your stomach)
Holding my breath for next update!
Thank you for you marvellous storytelling!!!!
Marie
person Kay
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
D-12! Idk what I'm doing, lol. Awesome. Halter, kinda saw it coming once he threw up a second time. Love the quick update! Keep up the awesome work!