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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person mistalis
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Great twist, and i am so happy he got a chunk of her leg.
person Obsesive Reader
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't care what other people say I like this chapter. D12 Anywho I have no idea how Harry is ever going to get back to his natural shape if he keeps popping out babies at this rate.
person under draco
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You know I bet Ceaser apparated Amilia (sp?) away after that was said or she's going to die by the whole family. I hate that you ended this chapter with that cliffhanger :P
person SB
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! You really keep me pulled in to the story!
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'll play the game D-6
person U.D.
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I forgot L -10.
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a nice twist! But why did she look at him sadly? Isn't that happy news? Or did Amelle's kick cause him to loose the baby. Please don't say that's what happens! Because I just know not only would it kill Harry but he would probably kill Amelle too. (Though that wouldn't be a bad idea, lol). I do wonder who will be a daddy next and how Harry would finish school if he can't even see his own toes XD
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oops I got so into it I forgot to give an answer! I choose L-10
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
D-12
person Neverreviewed
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!

Claire looked at him with soft, sad eyes.