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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pregnant? I was not expecting that! I pick A-12
person Linds
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm just waiting for Harry to rip Amelle's head off, she is a truly narcissistic bitch.

Now you aren't just gonna leave us with a cliffy like this of having Harry's stomach being kicked when is apparently recently pregnant.

L-12
person qwerty
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
!!! Harry's pregnant again! Also, wouldn't at least the older Doms would have known that subs only demolish their nest when they feel heat is approaching?

Great chapter!

oh and um D6

schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*lets off party poppers, throws streamers and cues music "happy b day to u (x 2) happy b day dear tRotD, Happy b day toooooooo yoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooou." *warbles happily off keys and cheers, letting loose balloons.

wow, guess i didnt review fast enough huh. well, 2 chappies to do in this review then.

those family moments are absolutely adorable. yay the power of evil little skirts. mwhahahaha.

wow, 5 days old and already has his own bank account. ^^ Gah, those newshounds are vultures, they really are.

man, having two sets of instincts in you must be hard to deal with but the fall out punished everyone. I don't know why they're surprised that har still does emotionally based accidental magic... they knew he was powerful. after all, he needed four mates.

wow, that's a LOT of siblings. ^^

what makes kyra so scary?

are all subs raised as subs like that? It makes them sound like a rather self important, stuck up bunch.

wow, that info is a bit scary. is there any particular age that the lack of sub ='s mental wobbles for a dom or is it different for each?

would the kids be safe running around then? I mean if there are molesty uncles and i presume aunts about, or is it only those of breeding age that have to worry?

oops... draco REALLY needs to watch what he says... everything was going so well.

Oh, DAMN them. they should KNOW it wasn't personal. Har was hissing at everyone. considering how long he HASN'T had to adjust to it, he's doing brilliantly well. They're going to have to do some serious crawling to make up for this, cause har will blame himself. it's what he does.

ohhh, those two are going to get it. seriously.

heh, go Caesar. lets see her resist that. ;p

man, amelle really is a prize bitch. will she be in trouble if har loses this baby or would har's body have aborted it anyway since it was so soon after his last pregnancy. No wonder poor har was so horny but i think that's got to be the quietest heat he's ever had.

with all those kicks to the gut, it's a pretty good bet that har's going to lose this baby. Since it was a freak occurrence, as i asked earlier, would har have lost this one anyway? I mean his body hadn't recovered from the last one yet.

how is it none of his dom's knew about the next thing. is that a healer or experienced dom thing to know?

thanks to syreen for asking the other major Q i meant to ask.
person Izzy
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter
Poor harry tho richard and mayron were harsh.
I hope that the new baby is ok with his stomach getting kicked.... hope you update soon im on the edge of my seat....

Oh and L-6

Cant wait for more :)
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love this chapter...the whole convo between max and his brother was so funny...it's like almost 4 in the morning and i was laughing so much i woke my family...but it's a great chapter and i love the fact that harry took a bite out of that bitch...go harry...i hope the baby is okay thou.....the number and letter i like the most are L-12....hope to be reading more from you soon...and happy 1 year anniverary.
person slash_adherent
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Another update and so quick! And I loved it. No clue why you were asking people to explain why they would hate it. The drama, god I'm eating up the drama with a spoon! Granted I could flay Myron and Richard for how they treated Harry but I do hope we get to see a nice resolution to that in the future and, *squee*, pregnant again! *glomps* you are amazing my dear. I just hope the kick didn't hurt anything.

Really looking forward to the next chapter...

And possibly seeing the little bitch put in her place. :D
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
D-6, A-12, L-10
person slash_adherent
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oops, almost forgot, 10-A :D
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH ARE YOU SERIOUS SO WILL HARRY LOOSE THIS BABY NOW THAT HE WAS ATTACKED BY THE BITCH! MORE PLEASE AND CONGRATS ON THE 1 YR ANNAVERARY! i HAVE BEEN WITH YOU THE WHOLE WAY.....