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Way to go Draco. Now Harry's even more paranoid. I wonder, do you use a charm to make your feet taste good since they are frequently in your mouth?

love this story thanx for the 2 updates this week!!!!! D12

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Im not trying to nit-pick or anything of the sort but in the beginning of this chapter when they are making fun of his food baby he mentions that he has only had sex with himself and the toys.... But there was an amazing sex scene just the chapter before. Was that just part of the joke since he couldn't be pregnant since he wasn't in heat or just a tiny error? I don't want ya to think im being rude or anything its just that when i write i like for people to point out when my stuff doesn't match up. Love the story and so happy for this update.... I was going a little sour crazy :-)

Awesome chapter, thank you! :) I don't think I will ever be bored with this story.
But of course I have a question... again. If it was already asked or there are an explanation somewhere in the story that I didn't notice, I apologize. So, why is it that all those subs doesn't want to let their children just be children and go to play? It is said it's natural to be so protective, but there was that dracken meeting a few months ago and the children there could run freely and play with each other. At this party there are at least 40 or more strong men, all of them family members, where can children be more protected?

Alexander seems to dislike those subs, LOL. Except Harry :D But surely he likes Asleigh too, doesn't he? She is so nice woman :)

wheeeeeeeeeeeeee, have I ever told you how much I love you : ) I loved it, the way in which you are filling in the characters in so i
n depth and detailed, the lecherous uncle the loving older siblings still playfully fighting over old arguments , it all adds to the overall depth of the story, although I do feel a little sorry for Harry, I personally would have wanted more than one lot of awesome shmexy time befor I fell pregnant again LOL, although I imagine Amelle is going to be ina shitload of trouble for attacking a pregnant sub !

12 A harry's pregnant i hope he doesn't lose this baby or babies i hope that he goes ape shit on amelle now ourcesar please don't kill this baby our babies want more

Omg your a seer! Your correct i hate you for leaving us with a cliffhanger!!!!!! Any who awsome chapter hehe i do hope harry gets some well deserved revenge on max's fathers and amelle. For your little game i choose D12. Cant wait for the next chapter i'll be stalking you on aff.net and facebook hehe....

please update again i can't deal with not knowing if she killed the babies

didn't i read somewhere that if a dracken hurt a child that they get sentence to death go amelle can die