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June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful chapter. It was awesome to see Harry's magic lash out the way it did, and I felt so much pity for him for all the protection being lumped upon him. Although, I thought that only the first clutch made the dominants so protective? Though with the possibility that the child is Nasta's and it will, technically, be the first time he could be the father maybe would make him more protective, but what of the other three.
Poor Draco being the omitted partner in the five baby making. I hope he gets some extra lovin' from Harry later to make up for it.
Also, I'm still totally completely pissed at Richard and Myron. And it really annoys me that Harry was so forgiving to them. They should suffer!!! (although not anything too bad I really do love them normally lol.) That being said, while I don't like that Harry forgave them so quickly, he was completely in character to do so. I would expect the Harry of your universe, with the family situation and his mentality on family to be instantly forgiving to people who he is quickly, if not all ready, looking to as the family he never had. So I wish he wouldn't forgive so quickly, its justifiable that he would. I do hope Max is still kinda pissed at them tho lol.
I also really, really, really hope you write the confrontations between Max, Blaise, and Nasta's parents when they react to the news that Harry just shared on his little floo adventure. Even if you don't put it in the main story I hope you add it to the Scaled Bits. I'm dying to see their reactions.
Oh, lookie there! You got me to review in back to back chapters. Kudos!!! You simply become more amazing with each chapter :D
Poor Draco being the omitted partner in the five baby making. I hope he gets some extra lovin' from Harry later to make up for it.
Also, I'm still totally completely pissed at Richard and Myron. And it really annoys me that Harry was so forgiving to them. They should suffer!!! (although not anything too bad I really do love them normally lol.) That being said, while I don't like that Harry forgave them so quickly, he was completely in character to do so. I would expect the Harry of your universe, with the family situation and his mentality on family to be instantly forgiving to people who he is quickly, if not all ready, looking to as the family he never had. So I wish he wouldn't forgive so quickly, its justifiable that he would. I do hope Max is still kinda pissed at them tho lol.
I also really, really, really hope you write the confrontations between Max, Blaise, and Nasta's parents when they react to the news that Harry just shared on his little floo adventure. Even if you don't put it in the main story I hope you add it to the Scaled Bits. I'm dying to see their reactions.
Oh, lookie there! You got me to review in back to back chapters. Kudos!!! You simply become more amazing with each chapter :D
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June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
C'mon Harry. The Hat wanted you in Slytherin, and I want to think it was for more than just your connection to Moldyshorts. I know you can be cunning when you want to.
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June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If Harry can so easily heal himself, is it possible for him to heal Richard or Ashleigh?
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June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I liked the idea off Harry taking charge as suggested, but I didn't think he followed through well. It seemed a little like an abusive relationship with all the doms and Nasta telling Harry off! Re the hot weather, 26? That's nothing. I'm from outback Australia where in summer it regularly tops 45C. I can remember when I was in he UK everyone would have their shirts off on the common as soon as the sun was out and it was over 20! Crazy!
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June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
super chapter greatly done
i loved the connection from harry with his in-laws
have to say i am sorry to hear Draco cannot be the father
as i am a drarry girl
Cannot wait for the next chapter
Dani Elle
i loved the connection from harry with his in-laws
have to say i am sorry to hear Draco cannot be the father
as i am a drarry girl
Cannot wait for the next chapter
Dani Elle
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June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Draco did bring Harry back up to bed, just the two of them, after their little orgy (or physical intimacy as Nasta describes it). Something could have happened then as they were both awake, something quiet, tender and intimate. Perhaps another Scaled Bits chapter? That could put Draco into the baby race. Or, given the hints of this chapter, Harry and Draco could get it on in Marianna's hottub or something as it appears Harry could go into heat even though he's pregnant. I'd love to see all of them have at least one baby. I also like that it turned out to be a mix of boys and girls.
Harry may be in denial about the pregnancy but Nasta is in denial if he thinks that if Harry had waited he would have taken Harry to see his dad like it was no big deal. After all, France is a much easier trip and he tried to stop that. I find it interesting that Harry appears to have better control of his instincts than the dominants. I want to be a fly on the wall when Nasta, Max and Blaise are taken to task by their parents. Lucius, on the other hand, would probably tell Draco he needed to be stricter with Harry. LOL Also, didn't Nasta say that he would know if Harry sent out a distress call? Why, then, is he allowing everyone to get so worked up?
Now for the questions. Wouldn't Harry having 5 babies while in school make it a bit obvious that Harry isn't a normal wizard and must be some type of creature? Also, Harry's frame was too small to carry one baby to term, how will he be able to carry five and still be able to attend classes given all the stairs? Won't he have to leave school after 1st term or was the comment about babies surviving at 4 1/2 months foreshadowing as that would put the possible births towards the end of the winter break? I thought Nasta was going to take an extended leave when Braiden was born? Is he just waiting until school starts to take it?
Another great chapter. I hurt so much for Harry who just wants a bit of control in his continuing out of control life.
Harry may be in denial about the pregnancy but Nasta is in denial if he thinks that if Harry had waited he would have taken Harry to see his dad like it was no big deal. After all, France is a much easier trip and he tried to stop that. I find it interesting that Harry appears to have better control of his instincts than the dominants. I want to be a fly on the wall when Nasta, Max and Blaise are taken to task by their parents. Lucius, on the other hand, would probably tell Draco he needed to be stricter with Harry. LOL Also, didn't Nasta say that he would know if Harry sent out a distress call? Why, then, is he allowing everyone to get so worked up?
Now for the questions. Wouldn't Harry having 5 babies while in school make it a bit obvious that Harry isn't a normal wizard and must be some type of creature? Also, Harry's frame was too small to carry one baby to term, how will he be able to carry five and still be able to attend classes given all the stairs? Won't he have to leave school after 1st term or was the comment about babies surviving at 4 1/2 months foreshadowing as that would put the possible births towards the end of the winter break? I thought Nasta was going to take an extended leave when Braiden was born? Is he just waiting until school starts to take it?
Another great chapter. I hurt so much for Harry who just wants a bit of control in his continuing out of control life.
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June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
In my line of work, we call that Irish twins. When the mother gives birth less than a year apart. The would think that the hardest thing for Harry is being submissive does not mean being a rug. Six babies all in diapers. Somebody is going to need to stay home and help with everything. Do Drackens have house elves? Somebody needs to cut Harry a break. Maybe his morning sickness won't be as bad this time.
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June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter, I think all the dominants are going to get a shock this time around, no more take everything from them Harry. I don't think Amelle will be game to start anything with Harry ever again, although I would have liked to see her punished, Question,,,did Alexander and family ever have anyy submissive drakens in their children?
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June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I feel your pain love, I live in Central Canada and its been high of 25 to 26 for three weeks now. Any rain we do get doesn't last an hour it's so hot. So even though we are in different countries I feel your pain. Anyway this chapter was sweet, I love Aneirin he's like an older Nasta but he thinks more rationally than his son. I have a great imagination so I pictured him cuddling both Braiden and Harry and I aww'd through the whole thing. Oh and I love when Harry goes all Slytherin, the way he manipulated Nasta was brill, sure I get that he feels guilty but he had every right too use the Dursley's as comparison to his dome behaviors so I say atta boy Harry! Until next time dear try staying cool!
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June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
with your weather, i'll trade you. we had the fire going all day and it was still fecking freezing. I could use a bit of the warm right about now. I mean Aussies are fairly used to warm (except for possibly tasmainians)but I imagine that to the welsh (and all those who live on the British isles really)weather like that is a serious kick in the goolies. remember, drink lots of water, wear a hat, use sun screen, and between a 11 and 3 try and keep out of it. sunglasses and similar eye protection is your friend. (cycles off more sun smart cliche advice as i think of it. See the 'slip, slop, slap ad for details. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ViuLeQho6pY <- my fave version of said ad.):P
this appears to be glitching so this review is going to be reviews. le sigh.
this appears to be glitching so this review is going to be reviews. le sigh.