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June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
o.O how r we suppossed to make it last? impossible...impossible i repeat, your chapters are too good and too adictive.
i loved Harry's vacation, he was so happy!! awww and soo cute chasing iguanas xD lovely
tnk u and have a good brake!!
i loved Harry's vacation, he was so happy!! awww and soo cute chasing iguanas xD lovely
tnk u and have a good brake!!
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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'll leave a review, now that I actually have an account. XD
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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so good love it it just sucks that this site only allows 5 reviews a day so i hope i didn't mess any chapter that the only reason i read it on fanfic because the easy use of reviewing
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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so hot love this go harry
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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the b day party i so hate amelle poor harry and richard and myron are ass i hope they grovel to harry like dogs but happy about the baby's
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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so good poor harry so want amelle to pay a new babies
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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love that harry saved his babies even if he didn't want a baby so soon but he'll love them. i can't wait until they find out that harry is having five babies i feel sorry for draco but when he gets his baby it will be brilliant its cool that harry can get with child just bye heating his body up if only i could do the same all my babies our grown and i mess having a baby it's been like 19 years and i'm only 39 but my husbands 57 anyway love it want more looking forward to more.
love that harry went to visit everyone i also hope he get back in control of his men that will rock but his also going to have his baby at hogwarts i do hope that he gets to have them at home to soon
love that harry went to visit everyone i also hope he get back in control of his men that will rock but his also going to have his baby at hogwarts i do hope that he gets to have them at home to soon
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June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
So I wanted to wait until I was up to date with the story before I commented.
I love the story so much the way you've worked everyone together.
I noticed that you said you like the Anita Blake series, it's one of my favorites.
Have you read the Merry Gentry novels, by the same author.
And just to say it again, I love this story you have created.
So I wanted to wait until I was up to date with the story before I commented.
I love the story so much the way you've worked everyone together.
I noticed that you said you like the Anita Blake series, it's one of my favorites.
Have you read the Merry Gentry novels, by the same author.
And just to say it again, I love this story you have created.
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June 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
(I apologize in advance for the mistakes I make in this review because I am French, I'm not good at English so I use Google translation.)
I first read the French translation of your fic on FF.net, and as there were only two chapters at that time, so I'm rush for the original version. I saw that your fic was deleted once for offensive content, I did not miss anything, so I went on reading adultff.net.
I read your 44 chapters in one go. I loved it so much, I read it almost every day! Not fully but mostly my favorite chapters. Often in fics where Harry is a creature, he becomes super powerful at once, or it becomes too submissive to his instincts without having the choice to choose his companions, and I don't like this. Whereas your Harry is already impressive level powers and magic, he is modest, logical, loving, endearing ... Perfect!
You say your Harry look like Brent Corrigan, I have a friend who look like him so much that he has been nicknamed Brent, now I can't stop blush when I talk to him and fantasize about him when I read your fic ... it's very embarrassing. lol
Harry's companions are really delicious! I fall in love! They are perfect! Each has its place in the family and each complete Harry. Have you actors who could represent them physically (as you did with Brent Corrigan and Harry).
I very appreciated already Draco, now I love even more. Since his first appearance (when he saved Harry from other drackens) I knew it was him. But it did not disturb Harry as Draco is the subject? They hate each other normally.
Blaise is too cute! I like his meeting with Harry.
I like Nasta and Max! They are really lovable! Harry was right to start dating older! (It's sad for Arsenio).
Harry didn't have family during his chidhood, now he make up with four companions, Remus, Weasleys and 5 in-laws (I don't count Lucius). Marianne's advice to Harry (CH47) are really effective! I can't wait to see Harry reuse his tears against his companions!
I want Max in my home! I read your fic at night before bed, whenever Max kitchen, it makes me drool and makes me hungry! XD In Chapter 36, Max made of chocolate to comfort his friends, can you give me the complete recipe with doses please! it looks really delicious too! I'm useless in the kitchen, the opposite of Max.
Your sex scenes are really hot! It's very well written! I get all red and burning every time! My favorites are: Harry's first time with Nasta, the discovered evening on the anniversary of Draco, Nasta and Max in the kitchen and the chapter "Little Tease" (Harry is truly sadistic when he wants). I can't wait when Harry use his sexs toys!
About Braiden, I feel that his parents spend the day to change and feed him, now that Harry is pregnant with five babies, it's gonna be hell, poor parents ... I feel like I'm a laugh when Pomfrey will announce the new at harry's family. Harry'll go crazy , six babies under 2 years. With any luck he will give birth in December, he'll be least tired. Draco'll be a little disappointed, next time, it is necessary than babies to be his.
Villains now, Dominic was really horrible! Draco and Blaise were right to torture him and kill him like that! Have they sold pieces as ingredients after Dominic? I hope.
Ron, I like fics where he is nice but I prefer those where he is silly, jealous and nasty, I hope Hermione going to leave him!
Amelle, why someone like Caesar chose this plague? I like fighting between Harry and that bitch, but it's a shame that Max and Caesar fought after.
The Dursleys ... I can't wait for the vengeance of Harry's family against them! They need them to be ruined, humiliated, imprisoned! Vernon and Dudley 'll be hungry, Petunia'll get a domestic slave! I hate them! I love fics where Harry's close friends and relatives to retaliate against them. And Harry really should admit what they did to her. The flashbacks (especially the F-B with courgettes) broke my heart. I hope that revenge will happen soon.
In short, I love your fic, one of my favorites since I discovered fanfictions 5 years ago. whenever I see a new chapter I jump for joy! I congratulate you for sharing your imagination and your writing talent with us. I wish you good luck and that the syndrome's block doesn't reach you.
PS: I've seen projects that you write fanfic, I love them already. Did you already started to write? Will you update before or after completing "The Rise of the Drackens". Again I apologize for the mistakes I made.
Tsukkina
(I apologize in advance for the mistakes I make in this review because I am French, I'm not good at English so I use Google translation.)
I first read the French translation of your fic on FF.net, and as there were only two chapters at that time, so I'm rush for the original version. I saw that your fic was deleted once for offensive content, I did not miss anything, so I went on reading adultff.net.
I read your 44 chapters in one go. I loved it so much, I read it almost every day! Not fully but mostly my favorite chapters. Often in fics where Harry is a creature, he becomes super powerful at once, or it becomes too submissive to his instincts without having the choice to choose his companions, and I don't like this. Whereas your Harry is already impressive level powers and magic, he is modest, logical, loving, endearing ... Perfect!
You say your Harry look like Brent Corrigan, I have a friend who look like him so much that he has been nicknamed Brent, now I can't stop blush when I talk to him and fantasize about him when I read your fic ... it's very embarrassing. lol
Harry's companions are really delicious! I fall in love! They are perfect! Each has its place in the family and each complete Harry. Have you actors who could represent them physically (as you did with Brent Corrigan and Harry).
I very appreciated already Draco, now I love even more. Since his first appearance (when he saved Harry from other drackens) I knew it was him. But it did not disturb Harry as Draco is the subject? They hate each other normally.
Blaise is too cute! I like his meeting with Harry.
I like Nasta and Max! They are really lovable! Harry was right to start dating older! (It's sad for Arsenio).
Harry didn't have family during his chidhood, now he make up with four companions, Remus, Weasleys and 5 in-laws (I don't count Lucius). Marianne's advice to Harry (CH47) are really effective! I can't wait to see Harry reuse his tears against his companions!
I want Max in my home! I read your fic at night before bed, whenever Max kitchen, it makes me drool and makes me hungry! XD In Chapter 36, Max made of chocolate to comfort his friends, can you give me the complete recipe with doses please! it looks really delicious too! I'm useless in the kitchen, the opposite of Max.
Your sex scenes are really hot! It's very well written! I get all red and burning every time! My favorites are: Harry's first time with Nasta, the discovered evening on the anniversary of Draco, Nasta and Max in the kitchen and the chapter "Little Tease" (Harry is truly sadistic when he wants). I can't wait when Harry use his sexs toys!
About Braiden, I feel that his parents spend the day to change and feed him, now that Harry is pregnant with five babies, it's gonna be hell, poor parents ... I feel like I'm a laugh when Pomfrey will announce the new at harry's family. Harry'll go crazy , six babies under 2 years. With any luck he will give birth in December, he'll be least tired. Draco'll be a little disappointed, next time, it is necessary than babies to be his.
Villains now, Dominic was really horrible! Draco and Blaise were right to torture him and kill him like that! Have they sold pieces as ingredients after Dominic? I hope.
Ron, I like fics where he is nice but I prefer those where he is silly, jealous and nasty, I hope Hermione going to leave him!
Amelle, why someone like Caesar chose this plague? I like fighting between Harry and that bitch, but it's a shame that Max and Caesar fought after.
The Dursleys ... I can't wait for the vengeance of Harry's family against them! They need them to be ruined, humiliated, imprisoned! Vernon and Dudley 'll be hungry, Petunia'll get a domestic slave! I hate them! I love fics where Harry's close friends and relatives to retaliate against them. And Harry really should admit what they did to her. The flashbacks (especially the F-B with courgettes) broke my heart. I hope that revenge will happen soon.
In short, I love your fic, one of my favorites since I discovered fanfictions 5 years ago. whenever I see a new chapter I jump for joy! I congratulate you for sharing your imagination and your writing talent with us. I wish you good luck and that the syndrome's block doesn't reach you.
PS: I've seen projects that you write fanfic, I love them already. Did you already started to write? Will you update before or after completing "The Rise of the Drackens". Again I apologize for the mistakes I made.
Tsukkina
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June 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yaaahhhh! I love it! Harry will control everyone :-D. So that meant He will have both girls and boys, well let's see how many of each there will be. And as usual I must add: This story is my favorite. I am so expecting the rest of the story!