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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule June 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't leave reviews very often but I absolutely have to for this. I truly enjoy your writing. I'm not only a fan of this but also of the Life and Times fic. It is really great to find a story that has such a well-developed plot, with original characters that readers can relate to and care about. I want to know more about all of the families and their lives (except Amelle because I love to hate her (; ) I look forward to every update and I've actually reread the whole thing 3 or 4 times. I don't know if I cried at the part that you thought but I did get teary during this chapter. I'm looking forward to the next chapter (I don't mind waiting because I'll just reread it again during the wait). Keep up the excellent work.
person Katja
schedule June 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I simply loved this chapter! Harry getting his first real vacation, seeing(?) the beach and all that other stuff. Brilliant.
schedule June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ch. 48 is awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Have you figured out where Harry will make his next nest? He'll be at hogwarts and 6-7 months from Mid August is early to mid march... very cold weather in scottland for a rooftop nest. I can't wait to see how you play it.
person roni004
schedule June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ilove it. have a great summer
schedule June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so happy that harry had a vacation but love the sex and the baby pics i so want remus and tonks to have teddy that would be good nasta getting it from his dad. yeah love itas far merry gentry the pick up around the middle of the first book and the rest of the book after
person Grim1989
schedule June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, the places you described I hope to one day go too.
schedule June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm on Chapter 32 right now. This isn't really a review, just a comment on one of the parts you put in the story. In this chapter, Harry complained about his balls feeling like the size of a snitch. This I couldn't quit laughing at. A snitch is about 1 and 1/2 inch or 1.5 inches in diameter. Male balls are about 1.5-2.5 inches. So for him to say his balls are normally smaller than a snitch - well, it just cracked me up. Don't ask why I have all this information running around in my head, I just learn things like this.
schedule June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the super long chapter. The boys finally got to enjoy themselves fully, without the fear of school, family, or even Harry's heat cycle to get in the way of them being able to truly feel the emotional side of their relationship. I'm most proud of Draco and how far he has come in the bonding with the other mates. Nasta is such a great top dominant and fights his instincts sometimes to makes sure that all of his mates are taken care of. Even Max let Draco and Blaise dominate him for a while. The boys will be better for their little vacation and we can give three cheers for Mariana making it possible. Have a good summer.

~~ Meechy
person roosickle
schedule June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow,can I just say wow, Harry seemed to have to come to terms with the pregnancy until the idea of multiples was brought up, I get the definate idea he's going to get quite a shock after the scan LOL, and poor Harry having to leave Briaden behind, I know he needed it but it is so hard to leave your baby, . Remus and the photo's made me tear up justt seeing a glimpse of wht could have been makes his life as it was so much harder to understand, the sex scene's were ofcourse wonderful : ) and it was great to see Draco getting some on his own for a change . A question though, in the first chapter it said in the information about Drakens that salt water is very bad for them however he went scuba diving in a place that Max saw a shark ? I thought possibly he went diving in a freshwater lagoon but am unawareof freshwater sharks? or is this part of the info on drakens that is wrong???