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this review is so late but i'm review anyway. just wow first and foremost. awesome chapter as are all of them but this one hit the hammer on the nail. oh before i forget you tried to psyche me out on chapter 47 saying that that excerpt you put on fb could be in any chapter, i knew what you were doing there, well played still good chapter. so getting back on topic this chapter just had so much in it that all of it was put together well. i especially loved the remus scenes it brought it all home that he is the only true link to harry's parents' and sirius' lives and for hime to be able to not only have photos of harry as a baby he can tell him about them and that really touched me, i had tears forming great job. harry's excitement during their holiday was just precious and i loved how you portrayed that innocence and kept it true to his character well done and his mates are just awesome. my two favs have to be max and draco, i love nasta and blaise but those two idk its just something you bring out in them that make them stick out. and poor harry pregnant again but this time he could have multiples, i feel bad for his mates they may not be able to touch him for a month if he has his way lol. can't wait for the next chapters and what this pregnancy as well as anything else you come up with will entail. until then ja ne :D

I love the story, but I was wondering if you were going to have a pdf version of it available. I would love to load it in my tablet and read your work anytime.

Love this story! I found it recently and I've been reading it all week. Can't wait to see how Harry gets through school preggers. I really feel for him and his mates lol. I don't usually like original characters in fanfic that much, but I absolutely LOVE Nasta and Max. So yummy!

Also I'm a little sad Draco won't be one of the dads. Have you thought of going back to edit that sex scene? Or maybe there will be some special Harry magic that makes Draco one of the dads? I couldn't help but notice he had a LOT of sex with Harry during their vacation. Only a few days after Harry got pregnant again. Surely a few days won't matter so much and Draco's little swimmers will be able to crash the party in Harry's sack? LOL. Okay I know I might be reaching here. Wishful thinking. Anyway, loving the story and I can't wait for more!

Another great chapter. I was originally following this on ff.net and ended up re-reading this from the beginning. I forgot just how much detail and how well written this is. Enjoy your break and I look forward to your next update. :)

I'm glad har got to see what a holiday is like before he has to go back to being a responsible parent and student. He did pretty well for the first time away from his baby for a significant time.
I'm still waiting for the a second appearance from another incarnation of the evil little skirt of doooooom. ^^

i adored this fic thank you so much for sharing it ^.^
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Oh and yes the Merry Gentry books do pick up after the first few chapters. I actually like MG better than AB for the simple fact that AB has gotten too angsty, bitchy, and bitter in the last few books I've finished. I have all except the last one but I have yet to even open the last 2 or 3 I bought. MG books have tons of sex, of course, but she doesn't get all pissy and cranky afterwards like AB does. FYI you'll want to check the pronunciation key for names and stuff. I can't remember which book it's in though. You'll probably do what I did and be like "WHAAAAAAAAT?" [headscratch]
BTW thank you SO MUCH for having Nasta's daddy take him to task! As much as he is one of my 2 faves (Blaise being the other) I wanted to smack him a few times for that caveman like attitude he puts out every once in a while treating Harry like a little kid.

Hi, this is my first review since I decided to read the whole story bf commenting. So firstly, thank you so much for writing this! It had been a long while since a fanfic had enraptured me in such a way and God knows how much I needed a distraction from my own life lately. I love all your original characters and the whole dracken concept is fascinating. Naturally, as every annoying/slightly obcessed fan I have a couple of questions that I hope won't bother you too much to answer (but I'll understand if you don't, with a busy schedule like yours XP).

So, I do LOVE reading Harry as a submissive partner in bed, this was one of the factors that attracted your fic to me so much. You know, submissive yet fierce - yummy! Out of bed, though, I've always seen Harry as a very independent and strong character, which doesn't mean he can't be sentimental and open about his emotions, and you seem to be portraying Harry just like that. What has been bothering me quite a lot is how Harry's dominants see him. I can't remember right now a line that Max said about Harry that pissed me off a lot so I'll mention one from Blaise instead. In chapter 41, he says "You all treat me as lesser, you treat me like Harry, like I

I cannot tell you how much I absolutely love this story,it probably tops most others I've read :) please update soon xxx

Merry Gentry does pick up--have you met Doyle or Sholto yet? I actually enjoy her harem of men more than Anita's, as much as I do adore Nathaniel's character, Merry's men are just so much more... well, godly. [snorts] Sorry, couldn't resist.

Well, dang! Talk about a heavy hitting chapter! (had to go back and reread it in some points...[smacks lips]). Love that Harry got his holiday. And more of a holiday than he bargained for! Ha! Good for them! And for us--did I mention, "yum!"

I'm actually a bit suprised that Harry's going back to school--as a student. I mean, I wonder how long it'll last. Because, well, I can see it's something he thinks he wants, right now, but the minute this pregnancy really takes hold of him... It's not going to be easy. Multiple pregnancies never are (not to say single pregnancies always are, you understand)... And with five babies...that's just going to make everything five times as difficult.

September will be tiring, but still workable, I'm sure. October will be pretty difficult. I can easily see Harry considering dropping some classes now to maybe, perchance pick them up again later. November will be a killer. Can't see him hardly making it to any classes at that point. Especially not if he does deliver increadiably early--4.5 months did you say? That would give them, what? Yule/New Year's babies? Depends on conception date, of course.

And I'm really struggling to see how they're going to care for 1 + 5 babies while at school. Even if Nasta is "working from home" and Harry takes a leave of absence from his schooling.... Still, if they can make it to June, Draco and Blaise will have some more time to dedicate before they jump into the work field. Trying to see if the boys would actually allow any of the Hogwarts students to help out/babysit. Suppose there's always the grandparents, now that Blaise's mum has proved herself....

A little perturbed by Remus's scene. Not sure what it was that turned me off from him during his pity-pout. Maybe the fact you mentioned he was offered a house near young-Harry and turned it down. Always kind of thought that after the grieving wolf had some time to come to term, he would demand to see his pack's pup... unless he was total guilted out of coming near the area. Still, I'm glad Tonks was able to have her wicked way with him! Ha!

Delicious chapter, and I've always been so delighted and excited looking forward to your updates. Sorry to hear you plan on actually enjoying the seasonal weather this summer if it means the muses won't be cracking! [eyes Seattle weather critically] Of course, sunshine and warm-moderate temps can be appealing....

~Andrea Readwolf