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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god.... How can a mother choose between her/his children? Even if they aren't even developed yet. Poor Harry. Poor Draco!

The update that so quick and awesome! Please update again soon!
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh this is sad what will you have them choose it sounds like harry dosed want them but doesn't want to loose them either.....
person Woodland Spirit
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! I'm not sure if I want him to have the selective reduction or not. Poor thing he's so miserable, can't wait for happy to come back.
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
poor harry... how could you decide. I know i couldn't. Especially when he doesn't know whose child they would be killing. It's a pity the wizarding world doesn't have artificial wombs available or a fertile surrogate to transfer the baby too.
Harry is small enough that he might be forced to chose it (does this mean the earlier vote of the baby ratio is null and void?)
All I can say is i can't see Har being able to go with this decision on a regular basis. Once he might be able to handle... maybe, after a lot of counseling and with much support but given the dracen propensity for throwing to multiple births it's sure to come up again, especially with four mates. would har be able to handle a continual sacrifice of his children? Well, maybe the later multiples will be fewer in number, twins, triplets etc. so it won't be as much of an issue.
person Lientjuhh
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it.. Well done.. :D
person kokoro
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
sorry but you said four and after five i don't understand @_@
person Ca Choel
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ohh. I love this chapter. Poor poor Harry with that morning sickness. I do hope it gets easier for him.
I can understand his reaction at the news of five chicks. It does sound like it might be a bit too much for him since he's already has a very young Braiden as well as school. I think that the best thing to do would be to follow the healers advice. I mean, he wouldn't suggest it if he didn't feel it was for the best. And I think that since Harry seems a bit reluctant to have more chicks at the moment it would be easier on him as well since I fear he might slip into a deep depression if he births them all. But I was wondering, if he decides to terminate three of the chicks - would that mess up with his instincts and make him more depressed or even suicidal? Because if that would happen then he must keep the chicks! But it's all up to you of course. I'm just thinking of Harry and Myron was right - Harry has a slight frame so it would put so much pressure on him that might kill him.
Anyway I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I hope it will come as quickly as this one.
Thank you for a wonderful story.
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love ch. 50! Poor Harry! He has to decide whether or not to kill some of his babies to give others life. Don't do it, Harry! You'll regret it!

Please update soon.
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so not fair i think that if harry was not meat to have the babies his body should do it it self not some selective reduction i kind of hope that that he keeps all his babies and that their health harry's a dracken so he should be fine want more
person roni004
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love it