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great new chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

I'd offer a hug, but I don't want the others to tear me apart. Good luck Harry, whatever you decide to do.

I just copies my facebook post... MUCH easier this way!!
Fantastic as always!! Great melon(inside joke for those who are friends with Star on facebook) as well ;) Shame on Blaise!!! I can only imagine how much he is truly beating himself up, and how bad Nasta feels having to punish someone he loves so much... I feel soo sympathetic for dear Harry... FIVE babies in such a small space... eating so much food, so much movement and kicking of the bladder and bones... painful! As for the vote... I think 1 for Blaise, girl. 2 for Nasta, girl and boy. 2 for Max, 2 boys.... Idk how I came up with that, but there it is... now everyone has 2 biological children, except Draco, for now, and they need little girls that Harry can really go all out and dress up with Narcissa and Ashliegh's help. Once Ashliegh appologizes anyways... Oh and Max's sister will want to play dress up too! lol

ahhh what a wonderful chapter, I was waiting to see when Draco would break and you made it Blaise !!!have they figured out yet that Draco can't be a father? If they havent I'm imagining that will be an emotional discussion, now to the vote that isn't really a vote ......I think Max should get 2 adn Max should get 2 with the last one being Blaises again but not being a draken , have you considered teh draken/wizard ratio for the babies? I think having most of them being drakens would work the best , after all being as powerful as Harry is it makes sense that he would pass on the strength of his Draken blood.

2 be nasta's, 2 max 1 blaise poor draco or some how one actully is dracos i am glad max's dads came and helped harry!

I like it.. Well don e.. :D I like the scene with myron and richard... I like the fact you open up the mates eyes to the condition of harry.. :D

Love the Chapter! I was reading this on fanfiction untill you had to rewrite. Thank you for putting the link to this site on your profile

My favourite creature!Harry fic! <3

Oh... another unofficial vote on who is the daddies. Hum... I want Draco to have one (I still think he could be written via the scaled bits story lines). Then Nasta and Max. I'm still kind of mad at Blaze for leaving Harry and Braiden alone in the last chapter but I suppose you can have him be the father of one of the soon to be new born.

In case I failed to mention it I'm always looking to see what updates have come down the pipe line from you and the Rise of the Drackens and Scaled Bits are among my top 10 favorite stories posted on AdultFanFiction. I'm still mad at Blaze though... I'm not as forgiving as Harry and the rest of his mates.

This is one of my favorite fics to date, I am always so excited when I see an update and have to read it right away, even if I am in the middle of reading something else. Keep up the good work. As for who I think the father's should be, 1 for Blaise and 2 each for Max & Nasta since none can be Draco's. I am looking forward to future updates and seeing all the trials & tribulations that Harry, Nasta, Max, Draco & Blaise go through.