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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Lientjuhh
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it.. Well done.. :D
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
actually this chapter explains a lot and the reason why draco should be a father yet you did that with the part of lucius and draco had their moment so no more whine and crying from me about draco not having a baby yet poor harry telling his family about first year kind of looking forward to him telling them everything and amelle is just a bitch i loved that briaden said mama
person under draco
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the fast updates. I'm glad Mr. Malfoy is becoming a better parent to Draco. Also thank you for adding a snipet of Snape in the lastest chapter. I think Regulus was kidnapped by another Dominant. Harry felt like me with my last pregnancy. I hated my daughter before she was born, I felt she was too soon after my first born. I tried to ignore getting ready for her. I cried to my fiance about not wanting her and I felt bad for not wanting her. Then I fell in love with her when she was born.
person under draco
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to add Amelle makes me so upset with her Mompetiton.
person CM
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this part of the story where Lucius finally sees his faults and how he's hurting Draco. Though everytime I see the talk about the new babies makes me sad because Draco can't be a part of it. I know they have many years for him to have babies but I'm afraid that you'll finish the story without Draco having a child or not showing the day to day events with Harry carrying his child like the way he is now for the rest of the Dominants and maybe just state at the end that he gave birth to Draco's child just like that. It'll be sad if Draco's child only gets the rushed small snippets of their birth. Do you think you'll stop it without Draco having the child? Sorry, it just really makes me sad if the readers don't get to see Draco's child birth:(. I know it's your story but I'm just saying how I'm feeling :). I hope you are able to email me
person sarah louise jones
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think I prefer the idea of more boys than girls in this clutch.
It was a gorgeous chater.
Amelle really does my nut in though!! Ceaser deserves better!!
I feel so bad for Draco, bless him!! He'll have his chance at a chick soon enough I suppose.
I want my own Nasta, Max, Draco, Blaise and Harry!! Their so adorable together!!
It's so bad, I look up other stories to read and I try finding Max or Nasta and they aren't there... duh!! Completely fallen in love with them!!
I'm still eagerly awaiting the arrival of Nasta's extended family to join the madness!!
All the best,
Sarah Louise Jones
xx
person CM
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm sorry I just wanted to add that I know this is still far from the ending but I doubt after this clutch Harry would be open to having another too soon. So will that mean we probably won't get to see it. I'm sorry but I'm really really sad and I'm actually crying so you might think it's stupid but I really like your story and I really want to see how Harry carries Draco's child too, I hope you don't end it anytime soon and end it without it. It's obvious I'm a Harry/Draco shipper but i like the other pairings too, But I hope you please please please show Harry carrying Draco's child.
person djaddict
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I agree I love this chapter as well!

So, I am sure this has been asked before but why wasn't it a big deal that Regulus was a male submissive? Did he hide from the council?
person alicem
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your fics. I was checking on fanfiction.com and learned that you most likely as well will be switching to this site permanetly. Then I noted this story and have been reading for the whoel weekend.

I look forwaed to the next chapter. The only concern is that there is no way to notify us when you have a new chapter up to read.

Alice
person Woodland Spirit
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good Lucius I'm glad he's realized what he was doing.

They thought first year was bad wait until they hear the rest, :) I'm thinkn' that Harry's going to end up with a sore bottom :)

Poor Sev, wasn't Harry trying to help him figure out what happen to his Mate?

Lovin' the fast updates, keep it up as long as you can. ^_^