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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i hope the rest of them remember to have bottle's ready as well as nappy's so strong i pray that all the babies make it and that harry only sleeps for a hour it can't be good for the last baby's back to be open without medicine but so happy nex didn't get killed
person Larimar
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Just, amazing birth chapter! Left me emotionally drained, but soooo powerful!
person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg I was so scared Harry was going to lose the kids! I was almost going to cry tears of relief. I hope they are all safe I mean wow i'm still trying to convince myself everything us going to be ok.
person sarah999
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a chapter. Thanks for the oh so quick updates. : ) I've spent the last two days rereading the story and got the the second to last chapter just as this one was updated. : )

I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.
person rinet
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hello SLM!

wow, I've read your chaps as you've loaded them, and this is my very first review, but damn, WHAT A CHAP! I am really enjoying this very complicated story, and thank you sooo much for actually continuing the story [I usually just read the completed ones, just in case the WIP's are abandoned]

anyway, just wanted you to know that I for one cannot wait for the next chapter, and chapters!!
person sarah louise jones
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING!! My heart was in my throat for the whole birthing scene!! Poor wee baby, I hope they don't lose the littlest ones, can't wait to see what happens next... even if we're waiting a week!! I am so shocked at this unexpected turn, but SOOOO good!!
Amele is seriously pissing me off!! I want to bitch slap her never mind throwing a bowl of mushy peas!! hehe
sarah xx
person Myuna-chan
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's lovely chapter especially when Braiden said his 1st word "Ma ma". It's rare to see the writer wrote if Harry was called as Mom not Dad. I ever read some reader's comment when the writer wrote him as Mom, they didn't like it. But I really love when Harry as Mom ^^
can't wait to read the next chapter~
person SpiritOfBeyond
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter too (Chapter 52)!!!! Harry's extended family is in for a major shock when they realize that all that happened just in first year... let alone what happened in the following years.

I love the way you're developing the story, and I eagerly look forward to each chapter. Thanks!!!

~Spiritxx
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
good fic, update soon please
person WizardsGirl
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I say Two boys, three girls. One boy & girl for Nasta, two girls for Max, and one boy for Blaise.

Update again asap!!

Hugs & Kittens,
~Wizard