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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh my god the last baby oh the poor dear will he /she survive?
person Chrissy
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You literally had me on the edge of my feet. I started bawling the moment something bad happened and now I can't stop. I'm so...so shocked and awed. I hope the fifth baby makes it...you wouldn't take him away...

And I can't wait to read the next chapter. Thank you for the fast updates. It sucks you gotta work again but I'll be patient.
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
my god.....oh my god....i about cried. But.. oh dear....the baby's poor back. *hugs self*
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well damn, he couldn't have gone feral at a worse time. still, the kids are alive... for now. it's so hard to get passed those damn instincts to get what he actually needs. And whose good idea was it to have the brat wench around. That's the last thing a someone in har's delicate condition needs.
poor Nora. I hope her papa can get her mother to back off a bit.
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
the last baby was so sad made me cry so much i hope they live
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
O_O That was horrible. Not the writing, but the fact that Harry went into labor so soon, that he almost killed Sax, and that the fifth almost died. I cried.
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That poor baby D:
Hopefully the magical medical society is advanced enough to help it.
person nique.c
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh i really thought that last baby was going to die.i have to admit that i didn't see any of that coming, Harry giving birth and that baby surviving.good chapter.good story. hey because the last baby had that whole organs or something on the outside of its body does that mean he's human? and just take your time hun , sometimes, mostly all the time real life comes first.
person Rainbow12004
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love it
person Syreen
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Star, you made a great job in this last week, I wish you would have still more holiday :)