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no no noooooo don't leave it there,continue please!!!Please!!!!
...you made me review for the first time in the 7-8 years i bean reading fanfiction feel proud

oh wow, poor harry, is the child with the inside out back going to survive or will he die as harry sleeps. maybe harry's magic will come into play and help the child. will harry be more protective over his final child becuase of the way he/she was born? are any of the drackens? oh i just can't wait for the next chaper this is so amzaing i loved it a lot please update soon

love
Violet Hope
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Hm it would be sad if the 5th baby died but for the story it would have been better because you had this pain and drama just fistting people's hearts at their pain makeing it wondrous and then you just let it go like your afraid of it. You should have ended this chapter at them grieving, how you put the baby breathing especially how you described the baby's back it kinda ruined it I believe. Oh the warning kinda detracts from the drama. Well I still like your story, I liked everything else in the story.

O my Harry, how is he going to cope? Is the l;ast poor babay alive? I wasent sure, its hard to read through tears.......they say that the hard times draw families closer together so I hope this is what you were thinking, its strange but I feel so much empathy for the mates, my husband always complains that there is nothing he can do while I give birth, they would be feeling so useless,,,,,,,,thank you for the warning, if you don't mind I probabaly wont read the out take due to I think you probabaly do kill of Sanex and he an Cesear are two of my favourite second string characters,

Oh, wow! Wasn't expecting the birth before the new year started, even if I suspected it would be even earlier than "normal"... Oh, but, that poor fifth baby! And, are we going to miss the window of opertunity for discerning whether the new babes are Dracken, human, or else? I hope some of the adults are thinking responsibly and pulling together emergency kits for the newborns--bottles and swaddling in the least, potions for every and any possibility....

I'm glad to see Ceaser stepping forward a bit with his wife. Although, I keep expecting to see her demise any chapter now. I know, I know... not quite likely, but still. There's only so far she'll be able to go before she really pisses Harry (and his magic) off. And then, it's *POOF*!! No more Dracken-bitch-from-hell! Wouldn't be a lick surprised if Quincy (or whatever you choose the name the fifth babe) and hir back isn't the catalyst.

I am immensely relieved that you graciously allowed all five babes to live--was seriously worried you wouldn't have with this chapter. Despite how much more trouble this will cause--one of the babes in a truly horrible situation, where even Harry's formidable magic might not be enough to sustain the babe... another babe terribly weakened... Really, it sounded like only one or two of the babes were truly viable. Another week you say we have to wait for more? [sighs] Seems so long, even with the Scaled Bits to serve as appetizers!

oh fuck I was so scared at first when the fifth baby didnt respond!!!!!!!! Then when she/he started coughing I laughed with tears in my eyes! I was so relieved!!!!

almost got the sniffles when the baby was announced dead, tho i'm curious about the baby's back, is it like those rare children who have their hearts born outside of their chest?

Very good chapter. You are officially only one of about half a dozen authors who made me cry from their story. I appreciate that you went with this version of the births instead of the "Scaled Bits" version. I am going to have nightmares from that chapter. I am also glad that Sanex survived for I do not think that Harry could have ever forgiven himself and the family could have, almost assuredly would have, been tore apart. I am almost afraid to read how Amelle will act when she finds out, especially about the weakest infant. I hate where this chapter ended; however, I really cannot complain for you have worked hard at getting so many chapters for the main story and the side story to us, your readers. Thank you for your hard work and have fun at work. I am waiting impatiently until next week for the new chapter.

All 5 alive! Though the 5th one! Poor darling!!! Will he live? What are the sexes? Is Harry alright? Will his mates get there in time? Something tells me something bad is about to happen. Soooo need more!!!!

Love the new chapter. Can't wait to see more.