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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Angel_Kellar
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This really was a super evil way to end the chapter, but i loved it anyways. :D i love the names!!! And i'm just guessing that Harry happened upon the name Lowri in the book. Oh, i can't wait to see and if i'm right i can't wait to see what Aneirin's reaction is. And i love the twist with the Faerie baby! i was thinking that Harry would have at least one after the whole "I'm Harry freakin' Potter... etc., etc." and when i saw the littlest baby i was think maybe... But i wasn't for sure. It was really cool how you explained the wings on his back though. :) And i can't wait to know his little name. i'm sure Harry's going to be super protective of him. Also, i've been wondering if you were going to have Harry explain sometime to the families about the rest of his Hogwarts adventures? i kind of got the hint that maybe you weren't in this last chapter, but i wasn't for sure. Will he ever tell his family about the rest of his Hogwarts adventures? Or will the ever somehow find out about them? Like an outside source like the newspapers, or people they know or work with telling them about Harry? It was just something i was curious about because Myron's reaction to Harry's first year was really funny in my opinion. And sometimes i get the feeling that while Harry has matured a lot in some areas, he doesn't really get the idea that the things he did during his Hogwarts years were really dangerous. And the fact that Myron's reaction showed just how much he cared about Harry and his safety was super cute in its own way. i will be patiently and anxiously awaiting your next chapter. Thank you so much! :D
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A Faerie!!! How wonderful!!! I'm sooo glad they are all doing well. It would have killed Harry if one had died.
person Woodland Spirit
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! All five are okay and he loves them.
person red-dragon
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey great chapter. I know it's going to be hard for my favorite mates, but I was hoping for a Faerie baby. An yes that was mean a cliphanger?!!! ;) I can't wait to see what Harry names the rest of his babies. I really hope they get back that newspaper and fast. I hope this story goes on for a long time, I really want to see how Harry goes about raising all of his babies; and dealing with his mate. I hope he doesn't give the Faerie baby more attention and forget his other babies. But I am pretty sure that's not gonna happen. I know it seems like I am toooo into this story, but that's because it written so real like.

I wanted to ask how long the babies who aren't born Dracken live, will there lives be as long as there parents? Also are they wizards or just human?
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, take a little holiday and return to multiple chapters of my favorite story - what a great way to end the holiday! I am so glad you rewrote chapter 53 instead of going with the one in Scaled Bits. I couldn't finish reading that one and was so happy with your rewrite. I'm glad Max has boys, he's made to be a father of boys and I'm glad Nasta had at least one girl so he will have someone who will always want to cuddle with her daddy.

Thanks for explaining about the multiple births for male wizards and how many have harems as I have wondered why people did not think it very strange and question why Harry was able to have a harem at school. Also, while multiple births may be possible for "normal" people, it is usually with fertility treatments so this explained for me why Harry's pregnancy would be seen as "normal" in the wizarding world.

You do a wonderful job at foreshadowing and it was fun to read so many chapters together to see if my impressions as I'm reading happened, such as problems should there be a faerie baby.

As usual, I so appreciate all your hard work writing this. Hopefully you will win the lottery so we can appreciate more of your writing.
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for ch. 55! Can't wait to see what the baby girl's name is.
person jenna
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please answer me ! all of the babies are alive ? Quintuplet= 5 ou 4 ?
person daan73
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
beautiful amazing fabulous chapter!
person daan73
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow i am speechless that was amazing!
so powerful and intense
i cannot wait for the new chapter
how are the children how are harry and how will de mates and familly respond!
what will be the name are they indeed al well ?
so exciting!
Dani Elle
person Inkosdelirium
schedule July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I have always been a fan of coming into creature inheritance fanfics but this is one of the most well written and amazing stories that I have ever read. I feel like I know each character, even the OC's which usually I don't even like. The whole story is flowing so well, I'm literally gushing about your story to all the ff writers I know because it is that amazing. You took this and completely made it your own. I can't believe it was left on such a great cliffhanger and I can't believe what happened!! Poor harry, poor mates. I hope that Amel---- I mean bitch didn't cause this to happen to the baby hen she originally hit him, like that baby doing magic unconsciously to protect the others. I am still so sad that Draco still hasn't had any yet :( Poor harry has to have more to make sure he can give him one to. !!! Gasp I hope this doesn't make harry barren I really really hope not!!!!!!!!! You are amazing!!! You really are, if you put other character in this (non HP) Then you caould definetly have sold this a s a book, I would 100% buy it. IT is amazing!!