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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Tani
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So... I'm mentally kicking myself right now. I started reading the latest chapter last night but stopped about half-way through because I needed to go to sleep since I have my own newborn in the house and now I come back to finish the chapter and it's hidden. D: Boo AFF!
However, yay that the faerie baby is ok!!! I almost cried last chapter when Harry thought it's back was "inside out". I'm glad all the babies are ok and doing well (up to where I read at least)!
Hopefully the story is unhidden soon so I can finish and start eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Keep up the good work! :D
person Jennifer
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is the best fanfiction that I've ever read. It is so well written and intriguing. I can't wait until the next chapter is updated.
person THEY HID THE STORY
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!! They hid your story! I love it, and I want it back, and more importantly YOU should have it back, so contact the admins and figure out what's wrong but PANIC!!! I don't want them to delete this story. It is far, far too amazing. If you have to find somewhere else to post it, fine, but GAHHHHH I don't know what their problem is. Disclaimer? Responding to reviews in author's notes? Heck if I know, but I wanted you be aware as fast as possible!!!!!!!
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YES! Now come here so i can maim you.

*voice or reason cuts in. 'now, now. If you maim the nice author person they won't be able to write the next chappie.'

Me: Can't i hurt her just a little... you know, in the bits that aren't needed for writing. She left us with a name cliffie!

VOR: NO!

me:*pouts.

That to the side. Are any of har's other kids Dracken or have interesting blood lines? It would probably be to obvious to give the Fairy kid a name that means Fairy Child, wouldn't it. >>

Still, I'm glad har can over ride his drack instincts at a time like this. Otherwise, like in the original version of the chappie, they would be very, very dead.

Will har ever recover completely from having one of his kids pull an 'alien' and try to but its way out of his guts?

Oh, oh man. Har's new family or so going to have that papers asses as grass. who needs lawn mowers when you're dracken mates can scorched Earth the bastards. Still, they are serious and hard core going down.

I'm thinking dear Amelle will have to shut her pie hole just a bit. not only has har managed to produce five live young, but he kept the youngest two alive when someone who was wholly in the thrall of instincts (the dear Am's appears to be) would have lost them. And he produced a Fairy Child no less. Is that cause har's so powerful? His power sort of kicked that recessive trait awake again?

Still, that kid has an interesting future in store I'm sure. Will more of the extended family be staying with them to help deal with the five new borns? I mean, one baby had them run ragged. With five they'll get pretty much nothing done and next to no sleep.

Looks forward to seeing what other names you come up with. *wonders off to look up the names in this chappie.
person PandaBlitz
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
..... I LOVED IT! A little Faerie baby, he will be just so cute as a child and handsome as an adult.
I'm so glad that every baby is alright at the moment.
A little girl!? Yay! But I kinda feel sorry for her... 5 brothers, not to mention 5 parents to chase away any future boyfriend/girlfriend. I wouldn't want to mess with her biological father..

I love the update, thank you so much!
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the chapter, it came at a perfect time. I'm glad all the babies survived.
person roosickle
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww, arent they sweet, I wondered if you would use the fearie part of Nasta's heritage , I ma so happy that you did,so we have one draken one faerie and three magical beings ...hmmmmm I wondering which one the draken is, I supppose I will just have to wait : ) and be happy to do so,still loving your story even over 50 chapters in .
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ok, this redeems what I was talking about in the past chapter =w= so what I said is now null and void ^^
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for answering my question, this is one of my absoulte favorite stories. I'm so glad that all the babies survived and can't wait to find out what Harry names the other three.
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for writing such a wonderful and in depth story. I have re-read this story a total now of 6 times, and every time I get a little something more out of it.