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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Nas sure knows how to make Harry beg during sex!!! xDD

I can't wait until they figure out that Kreacher will know what happened and ask Kreacher what happened to Regulus!!! I have been imagining different ways for that scene to happen~!!
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I forgot what the gender of the baby was! xDD

I hope it isn't a girl, everytime I read an Mpreg story, the first baby is ALWAYS a girl!
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*punches Ron* Whoops...sorry...my hand slipped..
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
motivation for a new chapter :D "I'll love you forever, I'll read you for always, As long as you're writing, my fav. author you'll be"
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Hermione finally came back to her senses, and I can't wait until Draco's parents come to Hogwarts~!!!!
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, you know..the more you talk about having night-shifts..the more I'm interested in them. I like staying up at nights, it's colder down here in Texas at nights. But then I would have to sleep during the hot days, but when I wake up to the cool night air I feel refreshed. *sighs* I still don't know which shift I would want, but I do know that I would try to get a part-time job.

*blinks* What the..why the hell am I talking about my future job life! xDD

This is a good chapter~!
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YEAH, HARRY!! KICK HIS ASS!!! >:D
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a good chapter, I loved how Harry met his mates families~!

And I think that making Ron the bad guy was a good idea, Ginny has been used to many times as the bad guy in slash fandoms! I really think that both are good with using as bad guys in stories, because of Ron's jealousy and I agree with you on that Ginny's relationship with Harry was too sudden and came out of nowhere~!
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter~! That's all I've got to say, I hate it when I forget some of what happened at the beginning or middle of the chapter when I review!! xDD
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schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This Is killing me! I started reading this on my way home across France in the car with my family (a total nightmare might I add), it was genuinely the only thing keeping me sane over my brothers obnoxiously loud sleep-talking and my sisters snoring... And now I am chapter less! I chose your story over a trip to the Eiffel tower... I hope you're proud of yourself!
But seriously, it's harder than you'd think to find a story actually worth sticking to past, what, 50 chapters? (I'm really easily put off by the length of a story), but I never once got put off by this. The concept may have not been yours in the beginning, but I can't imagine it playing out any other way. I'm normally bloody good at predicting stories or films but I have to say, i was totally stumped in 9/10 cases, when I thought one thing was going to happen, it didn't! It left me feeling ridiculously proud after I actually managed to guess right...

And I know in a story like this you really can't have favourites because theyre all so loveable, but Nasta... <3 he's so adorable, the way you portray him is so caring and protective- it rubs me the wrong way knowing that only a small handful of people in the world are actually like him. (obviously not on the Dracken front but, hey!)
I can safely say as a guy, that I am completely and utterly in love with this story. I normally hate reviewing because it's genuinely the biggest hassle but you deserved one! I can't wait for your next update!