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I really don't want to come across as rude or unthankful but I'm a little disappointed in this chapter. The little moment with Amelle was nice and I enjoyed finally hearing about her first mate but otherwise the rest of this chapter was just sex (which is nice too). It's just that after the wait I was hoping for the story to move along. Instead it's kind of like nothing really happened between now and the last chapter. Maybe it was just that I had gotten used to getting new information with each chapter like how the babies were developing, what they're names were going to be. The only new information this chapter gives us is about Amelle, who now may be a more sympathetic character, but she's not really one your readers are particularly interested in.

You my dear, I dont think you know how absolutely amazing your stories are. I never thought I would find a author who keeps writting after harry gave birth, but I did. Every time I read the newest chapter I keep thinking, how far can you take the story? And I realize I hope the story goes a looooong way. This has got to be the best fanfic I have ever read. You incorporate all the things a good story needs, romance, angst ,suspense. And the sex sence, needless to say, are amazing!!! Even the fights sence you have are amazing

Max get it off too easy!! Well, ilmy reciew on FF still stands :3 amazing as always

I can't remember if I've reviewed this story before but if I haven't, then shame on me. I just thought I'd write one as you might appreciate some thanks after your bout of frustration at the end of the last chapter, as you've written a story that has remained amazing throughout every single chapter that there has been so far. Which, after 56 of them, I'm sure is not incredibly easy to do (: And also to say that I am quite grateful you took time to write that sex scene :P

Another excellent chapter!

Chapter one:
Interesting story idea. I love creature stories with Harry as the submissive, especially when it

i really had a great time reading this story. I just discvered it last week and i couldn't read evereything else I had to know what will happen to harry and his mates. I don't crave for raw meat but more more, hope to read you soon!!! love tis story so much, see you later !!

I love every thing about this story. Can't wait to see what happens next!

I keep thinking that the missing blonde baby will be birthed by Draco XD a pregnant Draco :D

I just had a thought. Nas and Max already knew what the cat flap was for. har told them when they first found out about the Dursley abuse, so why did they make har say it agiain? Part of the purging process or did they just forget?