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I love how this chapter had a bit of everything. A bit of angst with Amelle, why I am now starting to sympathize with but I still don't excuse her actions. A bit of Hurt/Comfort with Max and Harry. And a bit of smut...that's self explanatory XD Anyway, great chapter as usual and definitely worth the wait. By the way yes, I did want to maim Max while reading that scene, thanks for the heads up!

Oh, I love how you made Amelle a good person underneath all that..ugh~!

And the sex scene...absolutely evil of you to make the other three watch~!! And I loved the toy scene~! :DD

Good chapter~! Good chapter~! Can't wait for the next~! :DD

And all this waiting for the chapter and it being updated made me want to focus on my story on FF.net~!

I tottaly love it.. I love the sex scene.. Well written.. Nicely done.. :D Enjoyable.. Totally worth it to read.. Well done.. :D

I don't want to bug you about the issues but since you address the issues with Severus and Regulus. I have one question. I thought that when you had the mating meeting it did not stop until you got pregnant. Which is how they if you need more mate due to not being pregnant. My heart goes out to Severus three years with no babies must have been hard.

Image it must be hard for Draco too. Watching all the babies but none are his and Harry wont being having anymore for a while. I know that he see them as his but it still must be hard.

lol yes mam! Thank you for the newest chapter. Ok so reggy is dead but did the baby actuallt dead as well? I am sorry if you have already answered this before.

I was going to ask about why Harry would have unprotected sex after that was how he got pregnate the second time when I realized that he has to be a certain temp. to get pregnate. See, some of us can pay attention ^_^ anyway, awesome chapter and I can't wait to read the next chapter, literal. When I get bored of all my other fanfiction stories I always end up re-reading this one. ^_^

*blinks owlishly* ok so that was a surprise. When I saw the name of the chapter I had a feeling there was going to be an interaction between Harry and Amelie again however I Was completely blind sided by the topic of the conversation. I'm glad you included this though, it showed that there was a reason as to why Amelle acted the way she did besides the typical 'Dracken submissive' instincts. While it doesn't excuse her actions completely because they were still petty and childish, we know the reason behind them. I was also glad to see that Amelie was able to start learn how to control her Dracken and that Harry will help her. I can see them becoming friends in the future and I do hope that happens. Ok and to round off this lengthy review all I have to say is HOT DAMN! I swear you try to one up yourselves with your sex scenes! I'm curious to see how you're going to top that one ^^.

Bravo Star keep it up!

Green

*makes a face. Okay, you got me good. Like everyone else i thought of Ami as nothing but a stuck up uber bitch and now she has a tragic back story. that's interesting. Different life situations trigger different instinct approaches.
Poor Ami. After something like that yeah, i'd be looking for protection too. Do they know Ami's back story? Considering what happened to max's parents, they might have been a bit more understanding.

poacher doesn't sound like an occupation that get's you a very long life expectancy. >.< Especially considering they've got to keep ahead of the searchers for 16 yrs to get any dividends AND they kill the parents. Stupid and wasteful. if they were thinking, they'd drug them and breed them. THEN they also have to deal with the subs family if s/he manages to stay awake long enough to send out a distress call. Easy money, it's not.

Good old Har. He's awesome. He'd make a terrific therapist. he seems to have a feel for the right approach to help someone.

I'll try and ease back on the questions a bit but, but, but... I wanna knoooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwww stuff. *whines.

*shakes my head at max and nasta too. they should KNOW about dracken healing and be ready to trust har's instincts over the word of a healer who obviously isn't in the know and that dinner. Childish much maxi. Seriously.

You GO Blaise. At least one of har's mates is listening and their revenge was priceless. Way to get what you want guys.

ooooh, naughty, naughty Sev. Still, considering Voldi was on the rise, it doesn't surprise me that they'd want to keep a critter heritage to themselves. poor Reg. I hope progress is made on that front soon, as har doesn't have much in the way of schooling left and they wouldn't really get to see Sev outside of that. he deserves to know what happened to his mate. Considering how many Q's are left over Reg's death, i don't see why Sev would have 'moved on' from it or why he'd even want too. how could he go happily into another relationship with this one so unresolved? Of course, if it had been Reg that survived rather than Sev, that would be a whole different story... As Ami's back story shows. I guess there just aren't enough Subs to allow one to off the mate market for too long if they lose their mate. Or would their instincts drive them to mate again regardless?... or, once they've been through therapy of course.

LOVE IT!

=w= Glad ya updated, and I know understand Amelle, so i somewhat like her now.