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Hi there, I loved this newest chapter, and I sincerely hope you update again ASAP!!!
Also, may I just say THANK YOU! My fic, Ar Sciathain Sciobtha has gotten so many reviewers/hits thanks to you advertising about it! It's been amazing, so yeah, just THANK YOU!!! ^-^

Hugs & Kittens,
~Wizard

I love this chapter. I thought it was really cute the bonding between Harry and Amellie. She doesn't seem like such a snobb after hearing her back story. And the story makes sense. I can understand why she's acting like she does with everything that happened to her. I hope that she will tell someone else in the family as well so that she can get the family support that she longs so much for.
And I must say that I really love Harry's attitude here. Is it just me, or is it always Blaise that's at te receiving end whenever the mates does something stupid in Harry's presence concerning the chicks? Not that I mind cause I find it hilarious every time Harry manages to get Blaise to give in. Like in this chapter with handing over Leolin to Talia, or when Harry tells him to shut up when Amellie is holding Braiden. I love it, so don't stop.
And Max was very childish with the food. I almost hope that Myron gets word of it and punishes his unruly son.
Has Harry been told that the almost attacked Sanex before giving birth? I would have loved to see the scene where he gets to know. I felt so sorry for Sanex. He's one of my favourite characters, so I'm glad you decided to keep him alive. Would Nasta have been able to forgive Harry if Sanex had been killed?
It feels like you've been rushing a bi with the last few chapters. I would have loved to see more of what happens in school. But it's your story so you decide how you want to write it. Though I do hope that It will take some chapters before they all graduate. (mostly I want to see more of your lovely Ron bashing) and I can't wait for the Weasley's to meet the new kids. It would be so much fun if the twins decides to "adopt" some of the kids and make then carry on the proud legacy of Moony, Padfoot and Prongs.

Love Amelle point of view on why she acts the way she does.
Some ideas for the scaledbits..
*Richard noticing Myron at Ashleighs grounding mate meeting with some hot myron/richards action!!
*the night Amelle lost her first mate and son.
*And i'm a fan of protective daddies who love Harry as their own so maybe a cute couple of scenes of Harry with the grandads of his babies :)

love what your doing... never stop this story im so addicted!! xx

O_O LOVED IT!!!!!!!! The opening scene with Harry giving all the babies a bath was just too cute. I thought of 'cruelbath' when you washed Braiden. Poor little guy. <3 (I still plan on kidnapping him. Max just needs to leave the damn room already! Grr!)I thought Myron and Max's 'fight/agrument' about the dummies was a nice touch. I pictured him flipping out about that considering his youngest daughter couldn't/wouldn't outgrow them. And Amelle opening up was something I expected after you told us about her losing her baby and mate, but I didn't see it happening quite like that. I thought the reality of the situtation would help melt her cold heart, but not show that much progress. However, I'm starting to except her a bit more, but I still do not like her. You are who you allow yourself to be. And she allowed herself to be a bitch. And she insulted my little guy. OH! And do I detect the source of Richard's scar? Did the poachers do the same thing to Richard that they did to Amelle's mate? If so, how the hell did he survive?

As for the love scene.............. OMFG!!! I wish I was Harry right now! Just having one guy do that to me would blow my mind. Add in three more and I'm in heaven.

First I want you to know that I LOVE this fic. It has been a very long time since I've fallen in love with a fic, and this is the first multiple pairing that I simply can't walk away from.

Second, I would really like to see a Drarry chapter. I know Draco is having family problems, and is still leveling out from the shock of finding out he is a creature, and GAY and with tons of very MANLY MEN...but I feel he is getting left behind. Dont know it you'll think this is me putting too much of my two cents into things, but I always imagined that Harry picked him, and felt safe with him in that feral state way back, because Draco is strong magically, and Harry on an instinctual and intellectual level KNOWS what Draco is capable of and can thus feel safe around him. He knows because of their EXTENSIVE history and rivaly. Anyway, just thought I should mention that.

Finally, I ADORE all of your new characters, Max and his entire family crack me every time. Nasta being the rock of the family is also really refreshing in these types of fics, where everyone can get overly emotional and carried away. Amelle in this last chapter too was just awesome, before she was a character you loved to hate, I still remember the "cut out her bitchy tounge" line and giggle to myself, but I really think you gave her some depth in this last chapter, so kudos to you!

I look forward to your next update!

Bad Max! Using food as punishment, just like the Dursleys. I hope Nasta really laid into him. And Harry still didn't get to eat! Hope he isn't badly affected by that. Poor guy

Glad Max was shown the error of his decision. Thank goodness for Blaise!

Go Harry, poor mates, they sure learned their lessons.

Please update chapter 57 soon ^_^

omg that was so hot. itvwas totally awesome. you rock!!
poor Amelle...i totally get her now...it must have been awful.
cheers

I can now better understand Amelle and she is getting better. What happened to her was awful.. what happened to her first mate and baby. I feel for her. I'm thrilled for Caesar.

... I loved the sex scenes... they were hot. Hahahaha... go Blaise.

Are we going to see what happened to Regulus soon? Not soon as in a few chapters but within the next... 20 chapters?

And how many chapters are you planning for ROTD?