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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Why are scales that are green or yellow worth more than other scales? Do different colored scales have different properties or are they just rarer? and one other question (because I haven't bothered you enough yet ^_^) What happens to a mateship with more than one domanint if the submissive dies? Do the domanints stay together and become like a "package deal" if they decide to try for another submissive? Or do they split apart? I'm sorry I asked so many questions this time around, its just that I've been rereading and rereading my fav. chapters. Also you do a great job with characters and world building, which is the hardest part in my opinon.
I love this story, makes me feel better since I'm stuck at home with a cold.
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! I've spent the past few days glued to my computer reading this, I'll tell you it made going to work a real bitch but it was worth it. What an absolutely amazing story! So well written! You made me laugh and cry, just this perfect combination of comedy and drama. It is just amazing. Definitely one of the best creature fics I've ever read! I like that you haven't made it a typical Harry sub story, I like he's kept that fierceness without it getting ridiculous you know? I love your original characters and how you portray Draco and Blaise. Oh I absoloutely love it in fact I'm going back to the start and reading it again because I need more till you update! Just... oh I love it so much I've run out of ways to express that! Okay... I've gushed all I can... for now. Oh do you have a set day for updating or do you post on your facebook page when you update? I guess I shall find out soon
person BeinDraug
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU STAR.

This was brilliant and finally we can stop hearing questions about Regulus. The weer adorable im glad that leolin is doing so well and I desperately want to see more drunk/dominant harry
person chester
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wait a second! Snape continues to have unhappy unendings??? He now has to deal with both the dead bodies of his lover and his kid??!? That's horrible! I would have wanted him to have some happiness after everything that he went through! He deserves it! Please do something to make him happy - like the baby living or something!!!
person djaddict
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is so enjoyable! More goodness aroung every corner.

I do have one request of your muse. I would love to see some one on one Harry/Draco action and/or a date. I don't think Draco gets enough Harry! lol
person Lizzosaur
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! Who knew reading it from Max's POV would be that hot? ;)
person grim1989
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
the whole time i read the part with them in the ally, I kept thinking Rita Skeeter is gonna be in their with them and a newpaper will show the next day >.< Harry has that bad of luck when it comes to stories about him.
person Emma
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG SO GOOD!!! I cried so hard when the found Regulus!!! I am so happy though that Severus has some closure! I know you are sick of the matter but I do hope that Severus finds someone he can heal with and perhaps continue with his live with. Please? lol! Only if you want him to though. And it would have to be a male submissive cause I def can't see him with anyone else. lol But anyway, LOVED IT and CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!

PS Oh and just and idea though but for Scaled Bits, I was wondering if you would be open to the idea of writing about Draco's transformation and his usage of the suppressant potion? I was just thinking the other day that it would be an interesting read. But only if you want to though!

Thanks!
person ArtemisEarth
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am still in love with this story. So much happened in this chapter it's almost hard to process it all. I'm going to have to re-read it before you get the next one up. Thank you for posting it, by the way. I know that you don't have to, but I really appreciate it.

I enjoyed the Harry/Max sex scene. It was intersting to see it from Max's point of view. I like how Drunk Harry = Demanding/Aggresive Sexual Harry. But why do I have the feeling that someone saw them? Someone with a camera? Who sells the picture to the Daily Profit? And that Harry didn't lose his boxers. They were taken by the same someone. I suppose I'll just have to wait to find out.

The babies are soooo cute. I can't wait to see when they start crawling/walking. I know it's a ways away yet but I imagine that they will be little hellraisers. I can just see them getting out of the rooms at Hogwarts and galavanting about the castle. XD Keep up the great work.
person Jan
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my giddy-on that was doubly yummy ^_^ Please update chapter 58 soon.