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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took so long to review!!!! I had to start reading your story all over again so I was caught up for the new chapter. And let me tell you reading it twice makes it soooo much better. There were tons of things I forgot! Max and Harry's dinner was so sweet. I really liked how they figured out the cooking situation. And man do I love Max's Dad's and family. That are a hoot! I hope to see Draco with a wee one soon. It would be nice to have each of them with atleast one heir. Though I'm sure Harry needs a small break. lol. Can't wait to read what comes next. (Just no major deaths please, I don't think my heart could hadle it yet!!!!)
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August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this for days and it is just amazing! I love all of the characters and the plot is very intriguing. I'll have to check back occasionally to see what happens post Max/Harry date night. :) I wish I had the talent and patients to write like this. I am amazed that you've hit 57 chapters (and not small ones) and there is likely some other big things coming. Very nice. :) Just lovely. Thank you for sharing it with all of us.
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August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
They are being careless. Leaving those boxers behind worries me.
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August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just had to review this chapter! I was heartbroken for Severus. I was hoping that SOMEHOW Regulus would be found under extended stasis or something similar. Sev really needs some light and love in his life. Maybe that's something you can work in *begs begs begs* since nothing has been said about the actual funeral or something. Maybe Sev and Poppy will find something once he has a chance to calm down and clean him for the funeral. Just a thought. I absolutely love this story and always come back daily to refresh and see if a new chapter has been posted. If I get impatient enough, I may just go back and read every chapter (again) and leave begging reviews! But yes, Sev needs love <3 and Regulus and their child are the only ones who can help him!
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August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If less proof reading means a faster update than I totally don't mind! To be honest I was so into the story I didn't notice any mistakes if there were any. Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next update :)
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August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. I just have one question. In fhs distort where Harry runs away to tell all of his in-laws about his second pregnancy, he talks about drackens ib front of ron at the weasley's. Does ron know about drackens? If so, won't he be a vindictive little bastard and tell some one?
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August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it! so cute, sad about regulas though. can't wait to see more.
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August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Im lovingn ur chappies, and im absoloutly in love with this story.But wich baby is a DRACKEN?!?!? the suspense is killing me! anyways update soon, hpe ur life is good ( coz it means ur more inclined to give us good chappies )
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August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I totally love the sex scene.. And the little bedroom scene after that.. I like it.. well written.. :D
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August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!! This is an amazing chapter!! >:D
Loved the part about Regulas, loved the part after that, loved the part where Harry got punished, loved the part where Braiden was so ADORABLE, loved the part where Max took Harry to dinner, love the part where they had sex in the alley, loved the part when they stumbled into the bedroom drunk as fuck!! Loved everything about this chapter!! *giggles insanely*
And about you not checking for mistakes...*claps*...I didn't even notice the mistakes! When a chapter is so good to me, my brain fixes the small mistakes so I won't have to read it over and fix it myself as I read it again~!
Good chapter~! *claps* *grins* Can't wait for the next one~!
Loved the part about Regulas, loved the part after that, loved the part where Harry got punished, loved the part where Braiden was so ADORABLE, loved the part where Max took Harry to dinner, love the part where they had sex in the alley, loved the part when they stumbled into the bedroom drunk as fuck!! Loved everything about this chapter!! *giggles insanely*
And about you not checking for mistakes...*claps*...I didn't even notice the mistakes! When a chapter is so good to me, my brain fixes the small mistakes so I won't have to read it over and fix it myself as I read it again~!
Good chapter~! *claps* *grins* Can't wait for the next one~!