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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person mistalis
schedule August 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I always love seeing a new chapter up, and this is my favorite story out of everything I read. Thank you and keep up the great work.

person CountBitchula
schedule August 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh my god. Okay

I understand Max and Nasta  were trying to protect Harry, but in this chapter I'm not very fond of them. I hoe they actually understand the consequences or Marianna Anerein Myron are going to tear them a new one.hopefully Harry's okay.

person Jan
schedule August 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'll have to agree with you, you do seem to like torturing these poor boys, but in the end it will teach them to think what's best formharry and not what's best for them, hopefully they will also learn to listen to Harry more, please update chapter 105 soon😁

person Anonymous
schedule August 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

just a note to say i've noticed some of the story has some missing words at the end of some sentences. Thanks for the update i'm hooked on this story.

person Anonymous
schedule August 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh my gosh! After all these years, I still absolutely love this story. Please, please, please update as soon as you can! I need to know what happens next.

person Whskykitty
schedule August 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh My Goodness!  What a cliffy!  I hope the next chapter doesn't take long!  Glad to see someone is trying to wake Nas and Max!  Sorry it has to hurt Blaise as well.  Well done!  Grade - "Outstanding"

person Jessica Ann
schedule August 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh my gosh!! Loved that last chapter. Honestly serves Harry's mates right and I cannot wait to see how  the extended family reacts to the news from the Elders. 

person Linda
schedule August 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Wonderful chapter, I really enjoy your stories and always look forward to new chapters.

person Emma
schedule August 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

torture! Lol jk. 

Another wonderful chapter! I shall be "patiently" awaiting the next chapter. ;) 

also, i know you play Pokemon. Do you have a dragon team for Harry and his mates ;) if you could pick a Pokemon to represent each mate, which would you pick? 

Ttfn! :)

person Anonymous
schedule July 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Brilliant as always. I love that you don't rush things, the story develops naturally. As much as I want to know everything now I really do appreciate the time you take to develop the characters. I've said this many times before, but saying it again can't hurt; I don't know what you do for a living, but maybe you should try writing original characters. Seriously you used someone else's creation for the base of the story, but look at the world you created with it. I wish you could write a whole Drackens series. You have all these wonderful characters that you could write each of  their stories. Seriously, great work!