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I have mixed feelings... I loved the chapter as a whole, but as individual events, I'm not that thrilled. Why? Mainly because you made my little guy cry throughout the majority of the chapter! (I'm still glaring daggers at you for that one *wink wink*) But also, when you told us you planned on giving the younger ones a little more attention, I expected more one on one action with each individual baby. I felt that while they were mentioned more then most of the last few chapters and there were a lot of cute scene; I felt like the mention of the babies was as an aside more than anything else. Additionally, while I enjoyed the Lupin/Tonks scene, I felt that it was rather random. Sure it gave a lot of backstory that I know people have been hounding you about, but I didn't really see the connection of it to this chapter. Other than those points, I thought it was wonderfully written and I enjoyed the majority of the chapter. Oh, and I swear I didn't go looking for it, but I found a typo: first full moon 'there' were together. Hope I didn't upset you, but I thought I should be honested.

Amazing chapter :)

Awesome chapter! I love when they're at school! It's so fun! I just wanted to ask a few questions and I was a little to shy to do so on your Facebook page, feel free to answer there or here I've been following like a hawk. I was going through the category here on the site when I found the original story you adopted, I was just wondering how you came about using the idea, I mean the first chapter is fairly similar. How did you decide what to use and what not to? What made you choose Blaise and Draco from the Potterverse? I mean I do love them but the author had planned Snape and Lucius, what made you choose the others? Also, what was your deciding factor on having Snape a Dracken but not one out for Harry? Also how have you individualised an idea not your own? That came out wrong, I mean people do it all the time in Fanfiction taking a world and building off of it, yours is just so unique I was wondering where you got all the inspiration? I'll stop annoying you with the random questions it's just I've read stories people have adopted and you can tell because it's not theirs they struggle a lot with it and it's not good whereas yours is so meticulously detailed I was insanely curious. Thanks for an awesome chapter and I'm excitedly awaiting your update :)

I love that you had some Snape in there. He so needed closure. The time with Nasta and Harry was devine and hot! Thank you so much for the update.

cool update!! look forward to the next one! I hope that Snape is ok soon and finds a new mate!!

Thank you...great chapter. Love the dynamic between Nasta and Harry.

My vote is for ALL THREE. They all deserve to have Harry.

Can't wait to see whats going to happen next. Please update chapter 59 soon ^_^

Awesome as usual, I love your stories so much so that as soon as I saw the post on Facebook, i went to AFF and read it right away. Loved jealous Nasta!! I hope the press finally gets theirs, think they all need to sue them. I hope Severus comes back to his life, I would hate for finding Regulus to break him down instead of giving him the closure he so dearly needs, it would be rough on Harry as well since he will feel it is his fault since he is the one who figured out about Regulus. Looking forward the the next chapter.

My little gut will be a year soon! Wicked. Great chapter, I would write more but I really have to go.