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Oh god, someone is going to die, and with Blaise so stressed he might be the first to go into the killing path, the others following close.
I love the babies!!

That is the meanest thing you could have done to me! Pleaaaase update soon, I'm dying!!!!

Why? Why would you leave a cliffhanger!!!!! *weakly smacks author* WHY!!!! *sobs*

*sniffs* I love that Ron has grown up, but I guess it was getting kind of old of him to be holding some kind of grudge for so long about something stupid and untrue.

*sniffs again* I really loved this chapter, just wish there wasn't a cliffhanger!!! *cries and weakly smacks author*

Ooohhh Draco and Blaise are going to kill them~~~ well maybe not kill, but I'm hopping for severely injured! And are Harry's stomach pains signaling that he will have another child soon? A blonde one perhaps? ^_^ I love the all the children and can't wait to see Harry with more, although for all their sanity I hope he doesn't get pregnant until they take their NEWTs test.

I do presume that there will be *some* sort of further education after Hogwarts. Afrter all I don't belive that an internship would be enough to cover a job like say being a healer or an unspeakable. I am presuming that some sort of programme would have to be followed with theory and practise invloved and that is what I meant with "student" loans. On the contrary, there seems to be some evidence as to the fact that several wizards have cars. * see the end of the Harry Potter series where Ron is driving a car* . Also yeah, not quite sure why I continue reading either but I seem to have grown fond of the characters...not sure if I am going to continue as they really do seem to good to be true at points but meh, you have a good writing style and u are claerly a first language speaker of English. That already puts you in the top 20% of this site I would say :P

I hope that you will write what happens when Harry's mates find out who attacked him and why. Poor Harry is gearing towards a heat isn't he? the grain intake has started and he is thinking of more children already. what will the reactions be to this? I wonder if the In-laws will help get revenge for hurting Harry. Nott and Astoria both need a reality check and wands snapped before it is their necks. When Harry tells the others what Theo spewed at him, his dominates are not going to be happy at all. Not only did Nott say and tell things to Harry that do not bare repeating but he also dragged not one but two of the four doms into it. Nasta, Blaise and Draco toss up as to who is most murderous. The poor babies are going to wonder where mommy is and poor Harry is never going to so much as pee alone ever again.

cool update!!

I really do love this story. I really like Blaize and he never gets enough love. Normally, I do not like creature fanfics but I approve of this one and I am always interested in the updates. AS a fanfic writer that is working on writing good fanfics, you are doing it really well, especially mixing the plot/drama/ and sex. I really hope you continue the story and update regularly and know that this fanfic writer loves you work!

Hi! I absolutely love this story! If you ever get the chance I'd love to see the scene between Alexander, Myron, and Richard at Alexander's party after Harry lost control.

Hi!

I reviewed on your FF.net page but that was pretty much the day before it got taken down so you probably didn't see anyway I just wanted to tell you just how much I adore this story! I've read it through about three times already!! I check this and The Scaled Bits practically every day for updates and get so excited every time I see one!

I usually dislike mpreg and avoid it like the plague but I found the way you wrote Harry's pregnancies gorgeous and realistic, I love your OMC's they are so beautifully well developed down t their families personalities and everything, it's wonderful! Also the way Draco was so how you'd imagine him being if he had been in this situation. I have loved reading it, I never skipped bits (which is impressive for me I often skip past paragraphs when reading) as it was all just so good to read! You're a really good writer and I adore this story! Thank you for writing it and spending so much time on it. It is appreciated! I was wondering if we could have even a snap shot of later on in the heat or is the whole point that be then it's all completely blurred in their minds and there's nothing really human left? I was just curious by how tired Harry already seemed just from the first few hours and if he just gets drained as it goes on how he has any energy to carry on after that? Let alone for the next 10 days!!

Anyway I hope you're happy and that life is treating you well. Much love and hugs x