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Awesome story!! I just finished the last chapter you put up and I got to say haha that was cruel. The story over all is amazing, the plots and the drama, action and romance is done very well. I think you are very successful in your story, you keep your audience even without the delicious smut. You story can stand on its own with out the loving scenes so that makes it all the more to read. Your OC characters are wonderful, it feel like they have been in the books themselves and they have wonderful personalities that just pop out of your story, I love the little twist of drama you drop in, keep the story even more interesting, and I love the resolution you give when you start a drama. Over alI brilliant story, you are a very talented author and I can not wait for the rest, I am going to be very sad when the whole story will be done to be honest haha I don't ever want the characters to end :D

..........on another tangent....I am weird and I like to look at other reviews and what not......really Sera12, what the hell does a car loan have to do with the plot??? Sure Max has a car but he had it before he met harry so I'm pretty sure it is paid off if you want to be technical. And if you read the story and understood, they the second pregnancy was a surprise because that day they all had sex was when the temperature for that day was a record high and all the boys were outside, he wasn't in heat, the weather just made it feel like that, and yes it raised the temp up that much because again in the story the writer clearly states that dracken temperature is hight than humans normally. So no he would have 10-20 kids on purpose every heat, and even if they did, I think that can afford it. If the author stuck with the Malfoy's are sticking rich then I'm pretty sure Draco's inheritance will help and so will blaise.....you are bringing up problems that would happen in the really world sweety...this is a FAN-FICTION so hence not real life. And to Serria_Silver12 (or Ser12) which ever you prefer.....really??? I haven't been on the the authors facebook but yes spoilers are a big thing, and with such a big following of the story some readers do and will get angry. If she get a big head then that is her prerogative not yours, and I clicked on your name and I see you haven't written any stories yourself, sound like jealousy to me. Why don't you write up or shut up yes? Yes.

On that note again wonderful story and please please please ignore the two twats and keep writing your wonderful story!!

Wow I can't believe Theo would do something so stupid! I really can't wait to see what Harry's mate are going to do to him once they find out. Because you mentioned Ron in the chapter does that mean he's going to be the one to find and rescue Harry? And when do Harry's friends finally get to see the new babies? I can't wait until your next update!

AAARGH! My word! GEEEEEZE! >> Okay minor murderous rage over. I hate cliffies. But I LOVE your story, and I guess I'll just have to wait... But oooooooh its so cute and adorable mixed in with bits that are AARRGH KILL moments, and bits that make you melt... and then hot steamy sex... This is honestly one of the best stories I've ever read... and if you ever want a beta, let me know :D I speed read, and used to beta for my mate. LOVE IT Xxxx

Welp, looks like Nott and Astoria are going to get their deads ripped off. Good old violent fun. Well, I certainly am glad for this chapter, a very good break from the normal fluffiness. I dont think Ill be ever be happy with the Harry and Ron situation in this fic, but I AM glad that you had Ron come to his senses and apologize, as much of a moron he is alot of the time, fics and canon-wise he always comes back. I'll still hold out hope for them, but we'll see how that goes.

Oh my gosh, what are you doing to me??!! HOW COULD YOU JUST STOP THERE??!! Oh good gosh... Nott and Greengrass have a whole lot of hurt coming their way when Harry's 4 VERY protective mates find out what happened.

I love the updates! I enjoy reading about the babies growing up! I am glad that we are getting some Harry drama again though ^_-
And I can NOT wait to find out what Ginny got for Harry!! I loved the chapter where he teased his mates with the skirt, I can't wait until he gets to use the new outfit XD
I enjoy this story so much!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

P.S.: A quick update will get you great big hugs from me and lots of Harry and Mates shaped cookies ^_^v

Oh Star you've made my tummy hurt! Logically I know (or hope?) you aren't going to kill Harry but still I'm all jumpy now. Please try to update soon or I might just lose my mine!

Oh you bad bad Star!! such an unnice cliffhanger....
I hope that Harry is going to be allright....
I bet that Draco and Blaise are going string them up by their little toes before skining them alive!!!

Wait! You can't just end it there! Come back! Please! I can't stand not knowing what going to happen, please update soon!

i just wanted to say i really enjoy your work keep it up i cart wait for more :)

Oh um what? Where's the rest? Lol! I hate cliffhangers! Why Star why? Awesome chapter, I liked the Ron scene I think they needed to have a good talk and I'm glad you wrote it. Also just curious where's Snape? He still around or is he in serious grieving mode and won't be appearing for several more chapters? I'm nosy and he's also my favourite character although in this story I'm torn between Max and Draco. Can't wait for your update, I'll be glued to Facebook for progress reports XD