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i think har is justified his comfort and snuggle time this time out.
does it matter which way he's raped for the sterilization to kick in or just that he is?
to be honest i'm amazed those to are still alive. i thought for sure that har's mates would have killed them.
seriously though, there is something wrong in theo's head. that sort of obsessiveness just isn't healthy. not to mention his actions were down right stupid. even if he'd managed to carry out his plans he still wouldn't have gotten blaise because his stupid arse would have been arrested and dumped in azcaban. like the WW would have let the kidnapping/rape of the BWL go.

I would like to say I've been following your story for a while- since I found it by chance at fanfiction.net i think it was. I believe you were on chapter 20 ish when I found it maybe a bit less. I never commented before because I am usually lazy but seeing as I am on a sugar high right now I thought "why not?" So here I am! And I would like to mention what a marvelous job you have done with the story. I swear that everyday after working all day I get home and check if by any merciful chance you have updated the story and when you do I feel super excited. I love this story and your writing. It really impresses me. It just blows my mind. I really do wish I could communicate as well as you do. I love the way you describe things. I love the path this story has taken. I love how you take seemingly ordinary things of everyday occurrence and by just description and emotion you turn them into so much more. I am truly impressed by your writing. You have done amazing; not only have you created a marvelous story but you have also stuck with it and carried through not stopping or giving it up. Most writers, including myself, give in before they have anything of value even if they have a wonderful idea. your perseverance and determination make me admire you despite the fact I have never met you. I hope this gives you the slightest incentive and assurance that you are amazing and should never stop writing.

I cant wait for the Durslys court time. lol

I love your story! Can't wait too see what happens to Theo and Astoria. Myron, Richard, and Marianna are going to have a field day with that. I live in Southeastern Connecticut and we didn't get hit too bad. Category 1 at best. We are going to be maybe another day or two without power here in my town....but I have a generator!!! Yay!

First off, I want to say that I would be devastated if you were almost done with this story; and I am so glad to hear you're not. I truly love this story, and I am constantly re-reading it in my spare time. It is so amazing! (Sorry I haven't reviewed before now.)

I was truly surprised how relaxed Nasta was at the thought of Harry staying over night in Gryffindor tower, I'm sure his Dracken was harping at him to keep the submissive safe (and in sight). Am I wrong? I would think his Dracken would be far to paranoid to allow it without a huge fight.

Your sex scenes are always the best! I can truly say they are the best in the HP fandom that I have ever read. They're all very realistic and show the love and affection they all feel for each other, and I just love this NastaXMax scene. Amazing! Although, I think the guys might be feeling guilty later, knowing what Harry was going through.

Draco and Blaise's immediate reaction are great! So real. Finding out Harry has been unaccounted for four hours? That was truly terrifying.

Harry's reactions were great. He did everything he could to protect his family, while fighting off a complete psycho! Daphne and Pansy's reactions were brilliant! So perfect.
I was so happy/proud (is that weird?) is see how well Nasta handled the family when they showed up, especially how he handled Myron and everyone's questions. (Especially Myron's. :) )

I am especially happy with Blaise's reaction. I am amazed that Max had enough control of his own to prevent Blaise from killing Nott. I know I wouldn't have, secret or not.
I am amazed at how much control the boys showed, by not going all feral on Nott and just killing him; which he completely deserved.

I think it's great to see how Harry is learning more about potions (enough to recognize them at least) just from being with Max. I think that is a great side effect that I am glad you chose to include.

The family's reactions are great, and right on key I think. Although Myron came off as very insensitive, I know he was very worried.

I'm surprised Madam Pomfrey didn't check Harry's back, knowing he was hit in the back with a spell. I guess it's a good thing Max keeps such things on hand because of Nasta.
Now that I seem to have written a few paragraph's, I think I'm done telling you how awesome your story is. I can't wait for the next chapter, and the next Scaled Bits (which are equally amazing). Sorry for this being so long, hope you don't mind!

I love your story so much I just can't get enough and wish there were more stories on this topic that are as well written as yours, keep up the brilliant work

Have a Happy Halloween too
and thanks for updating, was driving me nuts not finding out what would happen to Harry.

I have been reading your story for about a week now. I haven't been able to stop. I have laughed and wanted to cry with your characters. Sometimes I wish I had more than one husband sometimes. Would be so nice not to sleep alone when my husband is working nights. Happy Holloween!! Have a spooky night, and hope to see more of this story soon. I am now off to see what else you have written and hopefully find one of those stories to tide me over until this is updated.

Another great chapter -- and only a short wait for it.

Keep writing as life allows.....

yeah harry is safe i hope that those two suffer so badly i want them destroyed but i also hope harry fines a spa for him in draco that would be cool a new baby as always amazing