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November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have been thoroughly enjoying reading this story. I like the plot, the characters, the extra characters, and the different realms like drackens and faries besides the usual Harry potter and Hogworts. You are an excellent writer and reading this story and the bits has been great. I have never once commented on any of the stories on the site, you are the first one. The site and story is also kept on my phone so I am able to immediately open it up an see if there is an update, another first. Please continue on. I know that I and many other readers- silent and not- look forward to new chapters and read it as soon as we can. Thank you. Char
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November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
another excellent chapter. keep em coming. Thank you for writing. Finally got electric back. I live in New Jersey. Sandy is one nasty B.tch. Another storm is due on Wednesday.
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November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just recently got a profile on here, so I haven't reviewed before, but I just want to let you know that I've been reading this story for a long time and I absolutely love it! You've got the perfect "submissive" Harry and I actually really enjoy all your new characters. It's really hard for me to fall in love with OC's but you created them so well! I love the whole grouping and I am ecstatic that you're talking about the kids. Usually writers love the pregnancy and then skim over the birthing and Bam! you have kids. But your whole plot is really well done!
And that almost rape scene had me in tears. All I could think about is how crippling that would be; rape is one thing but to double the repercussions to include becoming barren?! With only those few lines hinting towards the rape, I was bawling my eyes out. I really want to see blonde-haired babies at some point. Maybe with green eyes...
Anyways, I always look forward to a new chapter, and I'll make sure I review more often. This story is worth a review for every reading. Thanks for all your hard work!
And that almost rape scene had me in tears. All I could think about is how crippling that would be; rape is one thing but to double the repercussions to include becoming barren?! With only those few lines hinting towards the rape, I was bawling my eyes out. I really want to see blonde-haired babies at some point. Maybe with green eyes...
Anyways, I always look forward to a new chapter, and I'll make sure I review more often. This story is worth a review for every reading. Thanks for all your hard work!
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November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aw i liked arsenio, not that i didnt like max. I just liked arsenio quicker and more attached to then max.
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November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please, I need more!! I love your story. It is amazing!!
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November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Go Harry!! I love the fact that you made me wait on the cliff while Max and Nasta had their moment. And a hot one it was") Can't wait to see what the fallout of this will be.
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November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I honestly never review any story, I'm not ready to admit just how obsessed I am with fanfics just yet. But this is the second time I'm commenting on this one. I love this story, it really sucks me in. I don't ever read anything too long because I don't usually have the patience to read other's stories. Your story is so creative, well-written, and absolutely captivating.
I just want to thank you so much because I love this story.
Also, I love all of your creative twists, the story never gets repetitive or boring.
Happy Halloween!
I just want to thank you so much because I love this story.
Also, I love all of your creative twists, the story never gets repetitive or boring.
Happy Halloween!
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November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm too lazy to sign in. I have to get to the bus stop in about an hour, and I'm sitting in bed reading fantabulous fanfiction.
I love it!!!
I was so upset at the end of the last chapter. I was having a mega-mental-heart-attack-a-sode.
I went trick-o-treating last night, and then my best friends mom told me she'd call the police if I even sat near her on the bus because she went trick-o-treating with me. Life. I'm upset because the one time I really didn't do anything, I get bitched out and threated at almost 10 o'clock at night on my doorstep in October. It's cold outside and I'm 5'1" and 76 pounds. I was cold.
But my cats cuddled me to make me warm again. And my mom pissed, but not at me.
I loved the chapter! I'm SO glad Nott failed and Harry got away! My last girlfriend was gang-raped and reading that part was upsetting for me. I loved it though! Although Max's parents pissed me off quite a bit!
Insensitive much? I thought so.
And now it's almost 7am. Ugh. I hate school these days.
Props!!!!
Update soon!!
Loves!!!
\^0^/
I love it!!!
I was so upset at the end of the last chapter. I was having a mega-mental-heart-attack-a-sode.
I went trick-o-treating last night, and then my best friends mom told me she'd call the police if I even sat near her on the bus because she went trick-o-treating with me. Life. I'm upset because the one time I really didn't do anything, I get bitched out and threated at almost 10 o'clock at night on my doorstep in October. It's cold outside and I'm 5'1" and 76 pounds. I was cold.
But my cats cuddled me to make me warm again. And my mom pissed, but not at me.
I loved the chapter! I'm SO glad Nott failed and Harry got away! My last girlfriend was gang-raped and reading that part was upsetting for me. I loved it though! Although Max's parents pissed me off quite a bit!
Insensitive much? I thought so.
And now it's almost 7am. Ugh. I hate school these days.
Props!!!!
Update soon!!
Loves!!!
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November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this chapter! I love all chapters! *g*
Sometimes I miss Draco a little bit... I would love a scene between him and Max and Nasta... that would be wonderful... maybe in the Scaled Bits?? But its only a suggestion...
Love you and your story! Go on little Dracken-Queen!! ;)
Sometimes I miss Draco a little bit... I would love a scene between him and Max and Nasta... that would be wonderful... maybe in the Scaled Bits?? But its only a suggestion...
Love you and your story! Go on little Dracken-Queen!! ;)
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November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So happy Harry beat the shit out of Notts... Though I had hope that Blaise had killed him... Oh well.
Please update chapter 63 soon ^_^
Please update chapter 63 soon ^_^