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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person K
schedule December 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was so cute and hot at the same time, I'm not sure how you did it! But I loved it. Sexy male waiters were yum, and I couldn't believe how flirty Harry got, I was laughing the whole time! Though Harry crying during dinner made me wince, because he seems quite girlie there but I guess he's just an emotional drunk? And their What confused me was Blaise as a quidditch player because in the book he doesn't play throughout the six years, J K Rowling defined him as a character who doesn't play in teams and rather look out for himself so I was confused when he was a player. But I guess your story is AU so it's OOC. Still love it though!
person yngoldfogee
schedule December 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is one reader who - although she would love an update a week 'cause I love this story - agrees with your attitude that your well-being is more important than the story, and your not the first writer I've said that to. I was totally entertained by this chapter and drunk giggling Harry is just so funny. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Have a great Christmas/New Year period.
person Desarae
schedule December 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is one Of the more creative and well written fics I have come across. Please keep up the good work. I also hope that your health picks up soon m
person djaddict
schedule December 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I do love this bunch so much! Even though there are a bunch of goofballs sometimes!

Enjoying!
person Volatia
schedule December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! It is literally the only story I have ever stuck with for this many chapters. Your characters are just all so loveable and Nasta is definitely my favourite. Can't wait for the next installment, I'm checking everyday!
person kyuubichild717
schedule December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just what was Harry's gift and when do the outfits come into play? Also what is everyone else reaction to Nott's attack?
person wasparkman
schedule December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Real life is just that and we all need to remember it exists. I love this story and will read it whenever you are able to put up a new chapter.
person dominique1
schedule December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so could want more
person pk7611
schedule December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope all is well!!!! I for one don't mind you waiting you can hardly live in front of your computer!!! Get better soon annnnnnnd is Draco ever going to get a little one I feel kinda bad for him ~
person sara
schedule December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story and the chapters are always well worth the wait.